Saturday, August 20, 2016

glimpse

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full moon glimpse
in my house of three
Hermit’s light
found its need
stars wrapped in the earthy wounds
wait for healing rain


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21 comments:

  1. Healing rain to wash all away, be nice any old day

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  2. the last two lines are so hopeful - this is beautiful

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  3. What a wonderful glimpse into your house of three.. it feels both fragile and precious..and i hope the stars and the rain heal xo

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  4. Your words are so precious to me....thank you...

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  5. I love the image of healing rain ❤

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  6. We do need both the healing rain and the stars... great opposites.

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  7. Glimpses that expand in memories.. Enjoyed

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  8. I feel the slightest hint of sadness in this piece of poetry. I did enjoy reading this.

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  9. Finding what one needs is always a blessing, especially in a home with a family that knows to wait together for life's healing rain...

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  10. You have really set the scene well, Humbird. I can see the view.

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  11. stars wrapped in the earthy wounds... so beautiful...

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  12. "Hermit’s light / found its need" it does sometimes...beautifully done...

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  13. It is always good to have a personal visit from the moon at night peeking through the window to say "Hi!"

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  14. soooo poignant, love this ....... stars wrapped in the earthy wounds
    wait for healing rain

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  15. Thank you so much for thoughtful comments!

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  16. Powerful personification. As a hermit myself, I appreciate the identification with the moon--always an outsider looking in (or aloof and not peeking at all).

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  17. We desert dwellers are always waiting for healing rain. Sometimes the wait seems interminable.

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  18. There is so much expectations in the healing rain. One puts hopes on many little things in real life.

    Hank

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  19. This is a lovely articulation of a house that waits for adversity or troubles to heal or pass ... as we all must.

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