d'Verse Poetic ~ Carved in stone
I’ve sensed your soul
in the depth of the
century
Promoted the den(s) city
to family falling
rocks, mountains
Shoulders, spine bent
long ears – open
to farewell
Crushed
in the grinder
of age
A m a z e… we found
unconsciously follow
in the spiral
of carving…
Getting crushed by age can sure make one carve out a new way
ReplyDeleteVery vivid emotions, well done.
ReplyDeleteI’ve sensed your soul
ReplyDeletein the depth of the
century............. lovely
I specially like the opening line.. these carvings with a soul ~
ReplyDeleteI liked your opening lines: "I've sensed your soul in the depth of the century"...pretty profound.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others the opening really sets the tone as the carving speaks to you.
ReplyDeleteOh.. art of human old and new..
ReplyDeletefollows the innate.. instinctual
and intuitive.. of letting reason
go.. and being flow..
where paint becomes
human instead
of reason..
and what comes
does come as
real human
magic
of art
then
and now..
a philosophers
stOne of heArT..:)
Fab take on the prompt.
ReplyDelete"I’ve sensed your soul
ReplyDeletein the depth of the
century"...........beautiful...
I can feel that soul.. almost like if my finger reached and touched the past...Wonderful
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