Wednesday, October 28, 2015

On the spot

'Raven flying home' by Lindsey Kustusch


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Nondescript grey day
Under the raven’s wing -
A puddle.

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A puddle
Mirroring a placid sky –
The quirky life.



14 comments:

  1. wow,
    beautiful start.

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  2. That first one is amazing. The picture is terrific, too.

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  3. A puddle
    Mirroring a placid sky –
    The quirky life.

    Life can be full of surprises. It may not seem to be what it looks like!

    Hank

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  4. Sometimes quirks make life all the more fun

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  5. A great piece contrasting two identical aspects of life.

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  6. In one spot you have created something beautiful and full humbird...puddles and shadows can be very clear - also thank you for your lovely comment

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  7. short, but powerful.

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  8. A favorite. Wonderful words for a great image.

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