Friday, September 8, 2017

three raindrops


Three raindrops
a greeting card from heaven....
midsummer heat
                                                                             © Issa

 red-hot asphalt -
sizzling fry thoughts
                   © Humbird

 flying away
following the rainbow
into heaven
                                         © Chèvrefeuille

open for new beginnings
and ascending stars
                                        © Humbird

*Image source: CCO Creative Commons

 Read more at CARPE DIEM's Tan Renga Challenge weekend meditation #1 raindrops

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25 comments:

  1. 21 WitsSeptember 8, 2017 at 10:25 AM

    You bring such meaning to life with each line!

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  2. Pat HattSeptember 8, 2017 at 10:37 AM

    Just what one needs to see sometimes as they drop away.

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 8, 2017 at 7:01 PM

    Very impressive. I got a feeling of connection, back to the beginning.

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  4. MONIKA DASSeptember 10, 2017 at 11:30 AM

    refresing rain drops.. well written

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  5. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 10, 2017 at 11:37 AM

    I love the greeting card from heaven and the ascending stars. Lovely images.

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  6. brudbergSeptember 10, 2017 at 11:49 AM

    Love how you connected the Issa with something really contemporary... some things change, but some things don't

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  7. JulianSeptember 10, 2017 at 12:28 PM

    I liked this, thanks for sharing

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  8. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerSeptember 10, 2017 at 2:25 PM

    Your imagery is gorgeous!

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  9. DonnaSeptember 10, 2017 at 3:48 PM

    What a wonderful inventive poem....

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  10. MarySeptember 10, 2017 at 5:08 PM

    Enjoyed these....especially the idea of following the rainbow into heaven!

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  11. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSeptember 10, 2017 at 5:57 PM

    What a lovely progression!

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  12. Wendy BourkeSeptember 10, 2017 at 9:15 PM

    The synergy is these pieces is rather mesmerizing. A fascinating collaboration!

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  13. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 10, 2017 at 10:38 PM

    Both Tan Renga are nicely completed. I especially love that second Tan Renga ... very spiritual choice to make that first stanza complete.

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    1. humbirdSeptember 13, 2017 at 8:39 AM

      Thank you very much for all inspiration I feel from the distance, dear Kristjaan! Blessed day!

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  14. MarjaSeptember 10, 2017 at 10:43 PM

    Loved it Beautiful images

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  15. indybevSeptember 10, 2017 at 11:43 PM

    Lovely little vignettes!

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  16. Gillena CoxSeptember 11, 2017 at 1:40 AM

    Nice ones Humbird

    Much 😍 love

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  17. Old EggSeptember 11, 2017 at 2:11 AM

    Well rain is always appreciated here in Australia like any greeting card.

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  18. kaykualaSeptember 11, 2017 at 2:37 AM

    The collaboration is perfect humbird! One is privileged to be part of it

    Hank

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  19. Sanaa RizviSeptember 11, 2017 at 6:46 AM

    Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous!!❤️

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  20. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 12, 2017 at 10:10 PM

    Nice ... Both Tan Renga are gorgeous and therein I sense a deeper hidden meaning. Well done.

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  21. humbirdSeptember 13, 2017 at 8:38 AM

    Thank you so much! I'm grateful for all your comments, dear friends! Blessings!

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  22. Magaly GuerreroSeptember 13, 2017 at 11:51 AM

    Love this heavenly bits, especially the first... The power of the imagery kisses skin and dances into the bones. Just lovely.

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  23. TournesolSeptember 25, 2017 at 10:21 PM

    Issa surely is smiling at your renga with a shift in your completion just like he loved to surprise us; you add such hope to our host's hokku...beautiful. Reading it made me smile.

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  24. humbirdSeptember 25, 2017 at 10:47 PM

    Thank you so much!

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