Tuesday, September 26, 2017

at the courtyard

Courtyard blues


at the courtyard
curly creepers keep track
the stories

hastily tapping heels,
creak of loosely closed door
to the barn…



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8 comments:

  1. brudbergSeptember 27, 2017 at 2:36 AM

    I especially love the focus on sound in the second haiku

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  2. Pat HattSeptember 27, 2017 at 6:00 AM

    Curl up a tale without fail

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  3. Gillena CoxSeptember 27, 2017 at 10:49 AM

    luv the ear of the vines in the first haiku

    much love...

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  4. LollySeptember 27, 2017 at 11:57 AM

    Yes! The details in this poem make it come alive with all kinds of possibilities. Lovely!

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 27, 2017 at 3:28 PM

    A beautiful set.

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  6. humbirdSeptember 27, 2017 at 9:28 PM

    Thank you, friends! Appreciate your comments!

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  7. 21 WitsOctober 1, 2017 at 11:02 AM

    Bravo, I like where your poem took us, not what I was expecting!

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  8. purplepeninportland.comOctober 2, 2017 at 7:37 PM

    Love that second one!

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