Sunday, March 15, 2015

In the car of ginny...

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In the car of ginny
gotten of the bottle
feelings burst…

All dressed up,
three wishes – gone,
captured. Next step – unsettled…

After all, life comes to rustling leaves, days-dry…

with a deck of ‘if’,
bittersweet tears,
and no stopping monkey-mind,
calling ‘blasphemy’
every step and try…

While I’d recall
the chain of signs,
symbols’ prophecy.

Light wind chime
through the sea shells
singing jive…

After all, life comes to simple ways  facing sky…

whole, born in
plagued desire
to the will to
keeping dawn alive
in the sun & rainy day
                within…
by Brenda Warren
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25 comments:

  1. Vandana SharmaMarch 15, 2015 at 10:05 AM

    we are what .......but a part of nature having its various parts

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  2. Pat HattMarch 15, 2015 at 10:56 AM

    We sure have a lot of nature within. I still want my 3 wishes though haha

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  3. annell4March 15, 2015 at 11:20 AM

    A lovely piece!

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  4. brudbergMarch 15, 2015 at 11:47 AM

    we are but part of nature.. still we are so dependent on the raindrops and the sun.

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  5. Anthony DuceMarch 15, 2015 at 12:01 PM

    Exhilarating, contemplative and a pause.. A rollercoaster of images and drama.. Enjoyed

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  6. scotthastiepoetMarch 15, 2015 at 12:16 PM

    Impressively light footed lyrical depth achieved here - Great read - thanks... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  7. MaryMarch 15, 2015 at 12:24 PM

    'Life comes to simple ways' -- so very true.

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  8. Sumana RoyMarch 15, 2015 at 12:37 PM

    "..the will to
    keeping dawn alive
    in the sun & rainy day
    within…" so beautiful thought..

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  9. ZQMarch 15, 2015 at 1:07 PM

    I always enjoy your free falling free thought.
    ZQ

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  10. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerMarch 15, 2015 at 1:55 PM

    I so enjoyed this flow and the images your conjured here---

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 15, 2015 at 2:55 PM

    I like the "monkey mind", the wind chimes and especially "the will to keeping dawn alive."

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  12. C.C.March 15, 2015 at 4:01 PM

    I like the idea that life comes to simple ways facing sky.....I always find that sort of return to simplicity when in nature, when facing sky or mountain or in the outdoors.

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  13. LeoviMarch 15, 2015 at 4:44 PM

    Great poem !! Perhaps life is simple and human complicated!

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  14. DonnaMarch 15, 2015 at 5:25 PM

    Oh to have those 3 wishes back!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  15. Old EggMarch 16, 2015 at 12:06 AM

    Dawn is hard to keep alive with shadows falling however the heart will have its way.

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  16. Kathy ReedMarch 16, 2015 at 2:02 AM

    Being optimistic is a good habit to chase those shadows away..

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  17. totomaiMarch 16, 2015 at 5:32 AM

    what ifs will always be a part of our lives. and there's no escaping that.

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  18. kaykualaMarch 16, 2015 at 5:36 AM

    Light wind chime
    through the sea shells
    singing jive…

    Being able to appreciate the wilds of nature that comes through sounds from the sea shells can be enduring and exhilarating! Great lines humbird!

    Hank

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  19. Jae RoseMarch 16, 2015 at 8:27 AM

    Sun and rain within can sometimes work out well..a cool refreshing burst of water to shield us from its force

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  20. JulesMarch 16, 2015 at 10:37 AM

    All our parts make us whole - even the dreams of night or day that challenge our being.
    Nice use of the word list too.

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  21. AmberMarch 16, 2015 at 12:44 PM

    This is a very cool piece, it has style and depth. I can't stop my monkey mind either

    mindlovemisery

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  22. humbirdMarch 16, 2015 at 6:14 PM

    Thank you for inspiring comments! Great week to all! :)x

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  23. Brian MillerMarch 17, 2015 at 9:18 AM

    i try to stay away from gin, especially if i am in a car...life can quickly turn to dried leaves that way....

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  24. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 17, 2015 at 11:00 AM

    I know that deck-of-if very well. It's quite hard to shuffle!

    Another Baja Whirl

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  25. GraceMarch 17, 2015 at 5:01 PM

    I was thinking of my 3 wishes before they fly away ~ Intriguing thoughts Humbird ~

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