Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Captivation

by hilariagalleries ~ pinterest



Receding moon ring
burst light between Earth and Sun
the diamond imprint
           I keep in my heart the spring
                                   Insight, a matching island…

Read more at: Mid-Week Motif PU ~ Captivity with Susan

 Heeding Haiku With HA Mindlovemisery's Menagerie : Spring
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27 comments:

  1. Sanaa RizviMarch 25, 2015 at 12:05 PM

    Beautiful Haiku... depicting the theme with grace and splendor! :)
    xoxo

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 25, 2015 at 12:36 PM

    I love this take on the prompt - held captive by the moon, by Light, and keeping in your heart Spring...lovely.

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    1. UnknownMarch 25, 2015 at 8:07 PM

      Lovely! sounds like the moon offers you hope for spring. I have to agree the past two nights that moon was amazing' I even stood out in the cold for a while last night.

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  3. ScottlBMarch 25, 2015 at 2:40 PM

    Nicely done!

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  4. SusanMarch 25, 2015 at 4:15 PM

    That which captivates is captured as well, and used in our poems. An intriguing little gem! I wish all captivity could be as benign!

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  5. moondustwriterMarch 25, 2015 at 5:21 PM

    Yes, I like that we can keep beauty captive in our hearts.

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  6. totomaiMarch 25, 2015 at 5:41 PM

    to be captivated and mesmerized by the beauty of what we see is a blessing. same feeling when a reader is captivated by the beauty of the poem he/she is reading.

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  7. Pat HattMarch 25, 2015 at 6:48 PM

    Lots of fun earth play. Quite the pic too

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  8. Old EggMarch 26, 2015 at 12:42 AM

    Such delightful captivity!

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  9. Jae RoseMarch 26, 2015 at 8:33 AM

    There is a sense of contentment in this and hope..as echoed in the picture..spring will come.. xo

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  10. AmberMarch 26, 2015 at 9:02 AM

    How gorgeous is this!

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  11. Sumana RoyMarch 26, 2015 at 9:46 AM

    A beautiful Tanka to be cherished forever...

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  12. Anthony DuceMarch 26, 2015 at 10:55 AM

    Today I wish I had the time and the right read, to pursue the image your words inspire here..
    Enjoyed

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  13. AnonymousMarch 26, 2015 at 11:01 AM

    lovely thoughts.
    your words fly.

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  14. AnonymousMarch 26, 2015 at 11:01 AM

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    nominate one poet you know for week82, and have fun.

    keep posting.
    lovely blog.

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  15. humbirdMarch 26, 2015 at 11:58 AM

    Thank you, my friends for kind words and inspiration! Much Love :)x

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  16. PanchaliMarch 26, 2015 at 1:10 PM

    Gorgeous! Such an unique 'diamond' is enticing.....It spirals me down a lazy route!! :)

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  17. MaryMarch 26, 2015 at 1:53 PM

    Keeping spring in one's heart always - that is the way to live!

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  18. HannahMarch 26, 2015 at 2:07 PM

    Ooo...I love the galactic feeling of your poem as well and the echo of the ring...beautiful!

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  19. ClaudiaMarch 26, 2015 at 4:26 PM

    with spring in the heart nothing can go wrong...i so long for spring...

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  20. GraceMarch 26, 2015 at 5:05 PM

    I like that diamond imprint ~ can't wait for spring, smiles ~

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  21. BlogorattiMarch 26, 2015 at 6:01 PM

    Spring, brings forth new beginnings.

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  22. Myrna R.March 26, 2015 at 6:52 PM

    Nice. May Spring be in your heart always.

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  23. AnonymousMarch 27, 2015 at 2:50 AM

    Ah. Beautiful. :-)
    -HA

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  24. Gen Giggles March 27, 2015 at 7:43 AM

    A happy poem, capturing the beauty well.

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  25. JulesMarch 27, 2015 at 12:08 PM

    A fan of all things moon, including the New Moon - next New Moon is April 18th :)

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  26. rallentandaMarch 27, 2015 at 6:45 PM

    Keeping spring captive in your heart is a good idea !

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