Elizabeth Taylor by Frank Worth, 1956 "Giant"
Don’t get irritated by the sound of disclosed door,
allow the bliss,
invite the triggers/signals to ignite an appetite,
even wear sunglasses to provoke a sun,
imagine flamboyant jumbled garden
with flowers and veggies,
‘cause this is a point -
re-tire the car,
lust lasts until a lasso twirling!
by Brenda Warren
Shared with PU Poetry Pantry
Great combination!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Gail! This one wrote it by itself. :)x
DeleteProvoking the sun might not be wise lol
ReplyDeleteNot much of sun, so won't take a big efforts :)
DeleteI liked that! Great title.
ReplyDeleteIt's neat when challenges are combined so effortlessly ....
ReplyDeleteYes, you right, not every time happens...~ Thanks :)x
DeleteBold, sassy and provocative... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Deletesunglasses do provoke the sun! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kathe!
DeleteI think this is about playing too...and I love the idea that if we put sunglasses on the sun will come...it's all a state of mind I suppose! :)
ReplyDeleteWith sun we go... :)x
Deleteallow the bliss...i like that...because sometimes we have to invite it in...and make changes necessary to achieve it.
ReplyDeleteYes, to think about, talk and feel! Thank you, Brian! Cheers :)x
Deletego, go, go!!! release and express yourself, open your mind!!! love, love, love it!!!
ReplyDeletere-tire the car...ha.. i like... and allowing the bliss is often a decision that we make
ReplyDeletethis is just marvelous! love love love that photo...and the words match it just perfect.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed this so much!
stacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
Firstly, "disclosed" as against the more common word "open". Secondly, "wear sunglasses to provoke a sun". Really caught my eye. Loved this. Well penned.
ReplyDeletethe final line's terrific...
ReplyDeleteNice poem about those signals to turn on the appetite!
ReplyDeleteI really like the scene you drew here; and I agree with Sumana....that last line is a winner!
ReplyDeleteI love the tone and the attitude you show in this poem, Humbird. It certainly matches the photo.
ReplyDeletemmm maybe a little longer ... maybe it lasts a little after the twirling too!!
ReplyDeleteLove this line, "even wear sunglasses to provoke a sun," and your closing.
ReplyDeleteWonderful - the last line was a perfect end to this.
ReplyDeleteLove so many of the lines in this, great write.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this so much. It's whimsical yet has some serious themes. Yes, let's allow the bliss and retire the car.
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty cool poem! I love what you did with the words! "Lasso" alone would have stumped me!
ReplyDeleteGosh! I really like visiting your site... lasso me in :-)
ReplyDeleteZQ
Enjoyed
ReplyDeleteAllow the bliss ..invite the triggers that ignite..interesting take...
ReplyDeleteI especially love the title and the photo you chose. Fun use of the words.
ReplyDeleteI always felt Liz Taylor was in control of all her characters (and much else I'm sure) and this pic here demonstrates the thought so well.
ReplyDeleteNow that was something!
ReplyDeleteNicely done! :)
ReplyDeleteLove your playful wordle.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of wearing sunglasses to provoke the sun.
ReplyDeleteOh, I like this one! Great writing :)
ReplyDeleteI like the notion of sunglasses provoking the sun!
ReplyDeleteThanks for cool photo! :)x
DeleteI'm sure that sunglasses will provoke the sun and make the rainclouds happy.. bring a macintosh... :-)
ReplyDeleteI really like this ...a wonderful stitching of words. :-)
ReplyDeletelust lasts until a lasso twirling!
ReplyDelete. . . love it but never quite thought of it like that before . . . :) Eddie x
Enjoyed your comments, friends! Thanks! It was fun!
ReplyDeleteThe images this provoked were wonderful! I enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteIt's always sad to see lust trail away!
ReplyDeleteMind over matter....a great write Humbird. :-)
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