Sunday, February 22, 2015

Yearning

hd-wallpaper, pastel


Craving
Tiny delicate petals
Falling

Hopeless parachutes
Umbrella perched uncut posts
By blue river
by Brenda Warren


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26 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2015 at 10:16 AM

    I sense a yearning for spring both in your words and pastel image. Soft and dreamlike,

    Elizabeth

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  2. Sumana RoyFebruary 22, 2015 at 11:19 AM

    So clever of you using almost all of them in such small space!! Bravo!!

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  3. MaryFebruary 22, 2015 at 11:38 AM

    You used these words to perfection to create interesting poetic pictures!

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  4. Sherry Blue SkyFebruary 22, 2015 at 12:05 PM

    Some interesting imagery here, Humbird!

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  5. GraceFebruary 22, 2015 at 12:55 PM

    I am craving for those petals ~ Good job on the weaving of words ~

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  6. Brian MillerFebruary 22, 2015 at 1:29 PM

    my fav falling petals are the cherry blossoms...so beautiful...
    i love standing in their rain...

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  7. GabriellaFebruary 22, 2015 at 1:44 PM

    Petals are both delicate and beautiful, especially in spring when the trees are in bloom. I long for them too.

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  8. brudbergFebruary 22, 2015 at 2:02 PM

    The falling petals are indeed like parachutes.. what a bless to stand in such a rain.

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  9. ZQFebruary 22, 2015 at 2:11 PM

    Never a dull moment on this site. Always enjoy my visit here.
    ZQ

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  10. Malia Craig Tagg Lawrence PageFebruary 22, 2015 at 2:15 PM

    this entertains.

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  11. DonnaFebruary 22, 2015 at 2:33 PM

    I am yearning for this same spring with these wonderful images!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  12. Pat HattFebruary 22, 2015 at 6:55 PM

    Hopeless as they fall and bring about life

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  13. moondustwriterFebruary 22, 2015 at 9:25 PM

    Spring and cherryblossoms welcome at my doorstep too

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  14. Old EggFebruary 22, 2015 at 11:05 PM

    What greater longing do we have but for spring when both we and nature can burst forth with life again.

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  15. Rosemary Nissen-WadeFebruary 23, 2015 at 1:17 AM

    Beautifully done!

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  16. MiskyFebruary 23, 2015 at 4:42 AM

    Nice and tidy!

    https://miskmask.wordpress.com/2015/02/22/before-i-was-called-back-home/

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  17. Jae RoseFebruary 23, 2015 at 4:58 AM

    What a beautifully succinct piece..in cutting down you have magnifyied the yearning and illuminated those falling petals

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  18. Gen Giggles February 23, 2015 at 8:27 AM

    A creative way to talk about trees, "uncut posts"

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  19. ClaudiaFebruary 23, 2015 at 8:44 AM

    the blue river there in the close for me catches the falling petals and parachutes...

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  20. Gillena CoxFebruary 23, 2015 at 8:53 AM

    nice, whimsical; have a good week

    much love...

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  21. Anthony DuceFebruary 23, 2015 at 10:37 AM

    Enjoyed.
    And I was a child here for a moment, blowing from a dead dandelion.

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  22. Vandana SharmaFebruary 23, 2015 at 11:24 AM

    For me its the opposite, I find it flowing so smoothly:)

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  23. humbirdFebruary 23, 2015 at 12:44 PM

    Thank you so much, my friends, for inspirational comments! Spring is at the corner! Much Love to all! :)x

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  24. PoppyFebruary 24, 2015 at 10:46 AM

    Beautiful art to complement your words of desire for the upcoming season. Here, on the island, it's almond blossoms that will float so dreamily to the ground, laying the path for spring.

    Poppy

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  25. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2015 at 2:14 PM

    this was a dreamy post!!! and a lovely imagery there!

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  26. SusanFebruary 24, 2015 at 9:16 PM

    Pretty. Tightly woven.

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