Friday, February 20, 2015

Pisces tides

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The peace Pisces tides
brought me your words,
sighs, syllables
have not pronounced,
clashed/confronted
with other you,
withered not –
craved
to embracing together-
ness of comfort,
a beautiful
view.

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9 comments:

  1. ✿February 20, 2015 at 1:04 PM

    "withered no" ... I love that phrase.

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  2. Brian MillerFebruary 20, 2015 at 2:08 PM

    i see tides in the opening line as a verb...
    inner peace is the fishes greatest strength...
    a cool play on the sign that started yesterday

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  3. brudbergFebruary 20, 2015 at 2:45 PM

    The way your words goes from the abstract to the reality to the far away to the closeness - there is a zooming effect that I really like.

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  4. Optimistic ExistentialistFebruary 20, 2015 at 3:35 PM

    This is truly beautiful. Lots of beautiful romanticism...

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  5. Pat HattFebruary 20, 2015 at 5:54 PM

    Such an embrace can comfort indeed

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  6. Anthony DuceFebruary 21, 2015 at 4:26 PM

    Enjoyed, although as usual, I’m not ready to leave the depths of Aquarius yet☺

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  7. MargaretFebruary 21, 2015 at 4:52 PM

    brings peace… well, the world is certainly ready for that.

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  8. GraceFebruary 21, 2015 at 5:28 PM

    I like the peace of those tides ~ Very comforting ~

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  9. grapelingFebruary 21, 2015 at 6:15 PM

    thanks for adding this peaceful pen ~

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