Thursday, May 7, 2015

Moon's vagaries

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The Moon tested…

The membrane between self - unknown was removed,
 withdrawn jelly/clay fragments floating in the sea
of change have gathered in a small sparkled islands,
morphed into vaporous gremlins, navigating off
any negotiations…

The whirlpools of ebbs & flow socked in the viral fervor
of unclaimed love…


Note: Inspired by Pablo Neruda's poems and tarot card "Moon"

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19 comments:

  1. Pat HattMay 7, 2015 at 6:10 PM

    Have to watch those gremlins haha

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  2. De JacksonMay 7, 2015 at 6:12 PM

    Love "the membrane between self-unknown," especially.

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  3. Sanaa RizviMay 7, 2015 at 7:24 PM

    Loved the overall effect of this magical piece.. :D
    xoxo

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  4. HannahMay 7, 2015 at 8:58 PM

    Your opening thought had me pause and re-read - that's intriguing...great poem.

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  5. brudbergMay 8, 2015 at 1:45 AM

    Oh the vaporous gremlins.. your word-choices are always intriguing

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  6. Gillena CoxMay 8, 2015 at 3:31 AM

    mythical and magical and a little bit morose

    much love...

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  7. Vandana SharmaMay 8, 2015 at 4:09 AM

    so many creatures are in love with the ever elusive moon!

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  8. Jae RoseMay 8, 2015 at 7:52 AM

    Sounds like a fevered quest and yet I know the moon will soothe and calm xo

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  9. MargaretMay 8, 2015 at 1:19 PM

    a mythically magical sort of poem.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyMay 8, 2015 at 1:40 PM

    I love the small sparkled islands!

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  11. OutlawyerMay 8, 2015 at 10:17 PM

    Very difficult to achieve change--it is likely floating in this sea. Thanks .k .

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  12. Magaly GuerreroMay 8, 2015 at 11:08 PM

    The pain in those last lines... so very deep!

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  13. grapelingMay 9, 2015 at 12:25 AM

    magical, filled with both light and shadow - thanks for adding your voice ~

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  14. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMay 9, 2015 at 3:09 AM

    Oh, what Tarot deck is that, please? Looks very interesting!

    The poem is very interesting too. :)

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    1. humbirdMay 9, 2015 at 6:15 AM

      San Antonio Tarot,- ha, free images. Please, check here: http://www.quickcardreading.com/free-tarot-card-images/

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  15. Kerry O'ConnorMay 9, 2015 at 6:11 AM

    The membrane between self - unknown...

    This is a unique image of an all but invisible barrier between ourselves and the vastness beyond individual experience.

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  16. hedgewitchMay 9, 2015 at 7:43 AM

    Very visual and vivid words, with a sense of floating into something one may not be prepared for.

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  17. UnknownMay 9, 2015 at 1:28 PM

    Nice words
    Dazzlingzest.blogspot.com

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  18. Susie ClevengerMay 9, 2015 at 2:56 PM

    "The membrane between self - unknown was removed" Love that. I agree with Hedgewitch. Being cut loose from one's moorings (necessary or not) leaves the spirit adrift without knowing what new hazards it must face.

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