B&P's Shadorma and Beyond
Do not store the inspiration
in a reflective tear…
Spilled to the ground,
pinned by artisan’s
genius tire,
it honey
the simple element,
row bell in opening
a new level of
alter ego.
{shadorma}
Do not store
in reflective tear
‘aha’ sigh
spilled, pinned by
artisan’s genius tire –
find alter ego.
Sunday's Whirligig 5
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Hi, that pic of the seasons is great..sometimes I think the alter ego is our creative side. It allows us to think outside our normal boundaries.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Truedessa! It's a good idea to look at our opportunities sometimes from different perspective.
DeleteTurn topsy turvy and one can see a new way, that alter ego has to be let out to play
ReplyDeleteTopsy turvy and one can sit on the tree, feed the bee... ~ Thank you.
DeleteWonderful.
ReplyDeleteI am always amazed so many beautiful pieces can be created from the same words while no one travels the same path.
Thank you, Gail! I loved to experiment here with nouns as verbs....
DeleteA New world and a new personality emerges out!
ReplyDeleteIt worth to try...Thank you, Vandana.
DeleteThe spill the tears unnecessary..
ReplyDeletebut if they are already here...Ths, Bjorn
DeleteTears can be of joy, of the finishing of an artistic piece.
ReplyDeleteThe reflection the unknown? Always good to look at all opportunities :)
Cheers!
As far as we see the reflection is very earthy... Many thanks, Jules!
DeleteThis sounds like a difficult quest: to find the alter ego. Who can succeed?
ReplyDeleteSome proverbs come out: "Through hardship to the stars" and
Delete"Not gods molded pots" ~ Thanks, MMT for words!
Love reading all the places poets went with this same set up words. I like the images you used. And thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Peggy!
DeleteLovely write and enjoyed your shadorma very much ... thanks for linking in!
ReplyDeleteI like this poem that generates feelings!
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful and inspired this is!
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