Sunday, April 26, 2015

Ink roar

~ Mindlovemisery's Menagerie ~


The words thunderously
read themselves in
my voice,
my ribs,
my posture, -
a quest to find
Achilles’ heel,
get stung,
then stop for retreat
reflecting…
the kiss of heaven.


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8 comments:

  1. Beautiful!!! Loved the first half the most... I can feel the reverberation in my ribs.

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  2. Hopefully those ribs recover lol

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  3. Very good.. Can see all of this too, although probably was influenced by your words☺

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  4. Oh wow this is incredible!

    mindlovemisery

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  5. The vibration seems powerful in your body like the OM of a mantra and then increases...very poignant!

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  6. Yes, nice poem, with expressive force!

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  7. Compact with a punch. You captured the image. Applause.

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