Saturday, April 25, 2015

Cinquenta

~ B&P's Shadorma & Beyond ~

Playing sick

Weary,
my three eyes playing
musical chairs
two ways.

~ B&P's Shadorma & Beyond ~

Who says rats?

Grown big
he distinguish
white noise
from peppermint.

Cinquenta - 50 /portuguese, here - poetic form of 50 characters.

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24 comments:

  1. Blog It Or Lose ItApril 25, 2015 at 10:57 PM

    This is a really creative take on the prompt! Thank goodness the puppy seems to be much better now :)

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  2. Pat HattApril 26, 2015 at 7:39 AM

    lol amazing how sick can turn around so fast

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  3. Anthony DuceApril 26, 2015 at 7:47 AM

    Enjoyed...

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  4. brudbergApril 26, 2015 at 10:16 AM

    I think that peppermint has a a more subtle edge than white noise.

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  5. DonnaApril 26, 2015 at 10:19 AM

    This was fun and the pictures were perfect.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  6. Sanaa RizviApril 26, 2015 at 10:56 AM

    This was quite innovative.. :D
    Loved it!
    xoxo

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  7. NatašekApril 26, 2015 at 12:15 PM

    made me smile :)

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  8. Vandana SharmaApril 26, 2015 at 12:15 PM

    we see strs all kind of stuff when not well ,but once fine all is well

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  9. AnonymousApril 26, 2015 at 12:42 PM

    cute, i like the pictures a lot.


    Things Could Be More Reliable

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  10. MaryApril 26, 2015 at 1:36 PM

    White noise from peppermint - I enjoyed thinking about that! Pictures are great.

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  11. scotthastiepoetApril 26, 2015 at 2:09 PM

    Very neat and effectively done - admirable clarity and wit here - I enjoyed.. Thank you With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  12. C.C.April 26, 2015 at 2:54 PM

    Very cute :-)

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  13. ZQApril 26, 2015 at 4:02 PM

    hahaha wonderful!
    ZQ

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  14. totomaiApril 26, 2015 at 6:31 PM

    adorable photos. interesting form. at least there's a distinguishable line between white noise and peppermint

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  15. GabriellaApril 26, 2015 at 8:08 PM

    I like these short poems and how effectively they complement the illustrations!

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  16. Old EggApril 26, 2015 at 8:52 PM

    It is always great to be surprised and amused by others poetic talents and get a laugh at the same time!

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  17. AnonymousApril 26, 2015 at 10:58 PM

    Love the first one!!

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  18. Bastet's Waka LibraryApril 27, 2015 at 1:13 AM

    Bravo ... nicely done, I love them!

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  19. Sumana RoyApril 27, 2015 at 7:51 AM

    aw..cute :)

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  20. Gen Giggles April 27, 2015 at 12:36 PM

    Great write I love the pictures used for inspiration.

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  21. AmberApril 27, 2015 at 2:44 PM

    Wonderful, love that first one

    mlm

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  22. Eileen T O'Neill .....April 28, 2015 at 11:14 AM

    Humbird,

    Loved this sick doggy tale. Rather cunning:)

    Eileen

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  23. PanchaliApril 28, 2015 at 12:25 PM

    Haha...thank goodness the fellow mellows down in the end😂

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