Olive Trees with the Alpilles in the Background (1889), Vincent van Gogh
I witnessed their escape:
bodies curved - intense effort
to lose the burden of
memory,
and twitching
in fever of hoarded
emotions.
Whether frightened of
imminent storm or
reaching the mountains,
the trees
were unwilling be tamed,
roots numb from standing so long,
bit rotten,- failed to hold them.
Reeling in the wind,
yet resisting, -
they already belonged
as a part of whole picture
to the brush of master…
I love the last line to the brush of the master. Well written
ReplyDeleteI love the life that you have given you - a wild unrelenting kind of spirit.
ReplyDeleteThe Van Gogh is a perfect match
Enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteWonderful tribute to the painting.
Already there, just had to come into being
ReplyDeleteOh this is wonderful, especially "the trees were unwilling to be tamed". Loved it.
ReplyDelete"Reeling in the wind, / yet resisting, -" absolutely tree like...well captivated..also a humble tribute to the master...
ReplyDeleteI love how you have taken us into the swirls and twirls of the painting...like falling leaves
ReplyDeleteThis is an excellent presentation of the artwork, as well as bringing the energy of trees alive to the reader.
ReplyDeletegood on the trees for bing unwilling to be tames...even that is the stroke of the master....
ReplyDeleteTrees revolt by being trees untamed. Lovely thoughts, beautiful writing.
ReplyDeletePerhaps you are a spirit twin of /Vincent, using words like his brush strokes! I see these trees wild in the wind's pushing and bossiness--it is way beyond dancing. Their roots may have failed them, but in art they live-forever.
ReplyDelete:) love the idea.... Thanks for the prompt, Susan!
DeleteI like the personification of the trees ~ How strong of the trees to resist ~
ReplyDeleteA wonderful Ekphrasis poem!!
ReplyDeleteGrateful for comments! xx
ReplyDeleteVincent certainly made his olive trees speak, as indeed you poem does.
ReplyDeletesuch a nice tribute to the master ...beautiful
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, it fits very well with the van Gogh.
ReplyDeleteYes, those are wild, stormy trees indeed. You've imagined their back story very well.
ReplyDeleteAnd what a wonderful brush the master has! Nicely expressed, humbird.
ReplyDeleteawesome
ReplyDeleteNature's Plan
The last line brings it all together.
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