photo-design by Jody Schmidt
You think...
if only
everything
could
happened
like in your
drift:
the right
kiln
on the right
tinsel
open all the
dotted lines,
and on the
other sign
your worth of
accepted
rumps
and roars
for happy…
lima bean
would you be
satisfied then?
for how long?
guess..
until you
catch
the magpie
new spawn
at the
correlation
of your
extraterrestrials...
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the right kiln
ReplyDeleteon the right tinsel and opening all dotted lines...ha...cool...and love the extraterrestrials there in the close as well..smiles
I like the thought of opening all the dotted lines, and I'd be apt to hide a few lima beans for sure! Interesting thoughts.... new and refreshing!
ReplyDeleteHee! I know I'd be satisfied with rumps and lima beans...if there was nothing else. Very fun how this turned out.
ReplyDeleteHopefully no probers catch me lol
ReplyDeleteLoved- " new spawn
ReplyDeleteat the correlation
of your extraterrestrials..."
I enjoyed 'until you catch the magpie.' That made me smile.
ReplyDeleteHmm...The ending made me smile. There were definitely some nice combinations.
ReplyDeleteThe scolding is sort of justified, so very well exercised.. Totally enjoyed..
ReplyDeleteThis is surreal and creative response humbird ~ Maybe an out of body experience, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteThis worked - it created a different meaning within its construct as it melted the known reality and set about new meanings. Super cool!
ReplyDeletesome cool expressions here Humbird especially the last five lines :)
ReplyDeletewill we ever be satisfied....? i doubt it...
ReplyDeleteand funny i think i can actually translate your verse
back to the original...smiles.