Thursday, January 22, 2015

Music in Desert

"Music in Desert" by Denis Bezmelnitsin, 2011
"Music in Desert" by D. Bezmelnitsin, 2011


The music in a desert
wings your soul
divine Ambrose,
the sounds tone by tone
dropped on the sandy spots
leaving trace, and path
was moisturized oasis of
breath and ‘om’…
 
Your toes touched by stones
of long time forgotten
relics of wars,
artifacts of hollow bones
awaken the spirit of
dunes, and past’s become
closer and pulled the
strings of heart .

A few could survive
the death imposed
its seal
over the seeds
ground, and the will
showed in heaven
the shift in clouds
of bitter tears…


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22 comments:

  1. Pat HattJanuary 22, 2015 at 12:18 PM

    Awaken a spirit and your toes may not be the only thing suffering woes haha

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  2. ClaudiaJanuary 22, 2015 at 2:22 PM

    i imagine that music in the desert must be even more fascinating than usually because of the quiet and nothing to distract the mind and heart from what is played

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  3. 21 WitsJanuary 22, 2015 at 4:07 PM

    Pulling at the strings of one's heart, very much so upon the desert and within music waves!

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  4. GraceJanuary 22, 2015 at 8:47 PM

    I specially like the opening lines of the music in a desert & awakening the spirit of dunes ~

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  5. Brian MillerJanuary 24, 2015 at 1:52 PM

    the music you describe is quite emotional...and i could feel it through your verse....

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  6. brudbergJanuary 25, 2015 at 10:09 AM

    Such music -- coming out of the desert has always had a strong attraction on me... There is something definite in that music.. endless yet final

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  7. UnknownJanuary 25, 2015 at 12:51 PM

    wow that image is striking and your poetry doesn't miss a beat in giving the musician a well deserved encore

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  8. NatašekJanuary 25, 2015 at 1:02 PM

    hmm..music in a desert.. that's a nice combination :)

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  9. MaryJanuary 25, 2015 at 2:05 PM

    I like to think about music in the desert. I think it would be quite different during the day than at night.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 25, 2015 at 2:55 PM

    I love "the music in a desert wings your soul"......and the spirit of the dunes. Cool write!

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  11. totomaiJanuary 25, 2015 at 4:55 PM

    your toes touched by stones of long time forgotten perfectly define the culture of pilgrims or tribesmen that we, most of the times, couldn't understand

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  12. TruedessaJanuary 25, 2015 at 6:26 PM

    There is different music blowing in those desert sands. You have captured its tune. Great pic..

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  13. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJanuary 25, 2015 at 6:54 PM

    This is such a vivid write--lovely!!

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  14. SuyashJJanuary 25, 2015 at 9:32 PM

    such lovely imagery

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  15. SusanJanuary 26, 2015 at 4:37 AM

    past’s become
    closer

    I feel this, shivering in the vastness of the poem's landscape.

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  16. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJanuary 26, 2015 at 5:30 AM

    I like the music of this.

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  17. kelvin s.m.January 26, 2015 at 7:44 AM

    To hear music that heals other than the sound of death in places like the desert is indeed incredible.

    - ksm

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  18. Jae RoseJanuary 26, 2015 at 7:46 AM

    How hard it is to taste the ambrosia when tears fall down our face..the beauty of the music lost...but not in your words

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  19. Carrie Van HornJanuary 26, 2015 at 1:43 PM

    Music is the language of the soul....this is lovely...and full of so many wonderful lines.

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  20. GabriellaJanuary 26, 2015 at 9:34 PM

    You set your poem in a very unusual setting. I like the idea of music in a desert and wonder what type it would be.

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  21. Gen Giggles January 27, 2015 at 4:16 PM

    The religious recluse is a great point for inspiration.

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  22. kaykualaJanuary 28, 2015 at 7:24 PM

    And music is the food of love too! Nicely humbird!

    Hank

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