Monday, November 30, 2015

Tavan Bogd

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Tavan Bogd mountains
the noise - growing intense
on the border
listening to shaman drums
the neighbors dream of peace

                                                              
                                                           
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9 comments:

  1. Pat HattNovember 30, 2015 at 10:38 AM

    Such peaceful dreams would be nice, unless the drumming is bad and peace and quiet is what is wanted lol

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  2. AnonymousNovember 30, 2015 at 11:15 AM

    very nice.

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  3. UnknownNovember 30, 2015 at 11:44 AM

    A faint mood of double meaning here. I would put tha tanka into present tense though. Well done.

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    1. humbirdNovember 30, 2015 at 11:53 AM

      Thank you! Timing noticed well....agree. My very best!

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  4. Brother OllieNovember 30, 2015 at 9:28 PM

    Such is life with Shaman neighbours. Cool poem!

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  5. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 30, 2015 at 11:13 PM

    Awesome tanka Humbird

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    1. humbirdDecember 1, 2015 at 6:49 AM

      Thank you so much, Kristjaan! Enjoyed the prompt!

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  6. Carol CampbellDecember 1, 2015 at 8:33 AM

    Dreams like this are just perfect!

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  7. 21 WitsDecember 2, 2015 at 10:44 AM

    Such a pleasant feeling throughout.

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