Lyn Perry 'Birch grove and clouds' ~ fineartamerica.com
*
follow the
blueprints
how deep is the
water
to revelation
**
a birch grove
black and
white passage
into the mist
eerie bush
***
I walk
between trees
caught in dim
light
the shadows
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Sometimes the blueprints need to be remade to cast those shadows out
ReplyDeleteGood idea! Thanks!
Delete>To revelation; caught in dim light; a birch grove.<
ReplyDelete__Your words. With my apologies... by using them to record a fourth verse, found among your fine three._m
Nice...bravo!
DeleteEnjoyed the walk within.
ReplyDeleteMe too, thank you :)
DeleteThe third one is my favourite. Thanks for dropping by my blog to read mine
ReplyDeleteMuch love...
Glad to see you here, Gillena! Great day!
Deletethe ending lines are very powerful.
ReplyDeleteThs!
DeleteWow Humbird your series is beautiful 'yugen' has caught you. That 2nd is very strong and full of mystery.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kristjaan!
Deletelove the haiku specially the last one ~ have a lovely week humbird ~
ReplyDeleteThank you, Grace! Same to you :)
DeleteThese are well written, Humbird.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
DeleteI really dig these captured moments.
ReplyDeleteNice. Glad to see you. Ths. :)
DeleteWell done.
ReplyDeleteReally beautiful mysterious haiku ... they send shivers up my spine ... Bastet
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