EDWARD
Putintsev Altai. Falls Korb. 1954
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Shaman leans
to the chest
kantele
strings through the heart
beloved
**
in teepee
hot stones meditative
trance
shamanic tea
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waterfall
rocks
gather pace
with a song
focal moment
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A way that would be nice to breathe and take a break, not forever though haha
ReplyDeleteluv the last one best, have a good Saturday
ReplyDeletemuch love...
and you too, Gilena! Blessings!x
DeleteI really like very much how you incorporated essential themes and objects of shamanism into the haiku. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you! The prompt, music and inspiring examples - the best!
DeleteFeeling called to a higher place after reading these!
ReplyDeleteI love theme very much too! Thank you Carol!
DeleteFeels like a very relaxing moment
ReplyDeleteAh, water...sigh....Thanks!
DeleteYou capture something of the shamanic journey here. - Suzanne
ReplyDeleteMystery....ths!
DeleteWonderful images in a mostly hidden world. Somehow far off today difficult to escape to..
ReplyDeletefor sure...Thanks, Anthony!
DeleteI can almost feel the hidden shaman in your haiku, your third is really nice and with a spiritual meaning.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kristjaan!
Deletebrilliantly written... II liked your third haiku the best ... bastet
ReplyDeleteThank you, Georgia!
DeleteSomething so special about a waterfall!
ReplyDeleteSuch a peaceful feel!
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