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Fluidity takes its power
Rain
Body empowered
Re-think, re-treat, re-born.
Rusty hinges worn
No naivety, naughty
or good stagger
by the gate of
paradise.
Sweat burn panic
redeemed,
stopped
on the threshold
thousands of raindrops
talk
always simultaneously
perform high,
sorted out
the choices,
alliances’ help
the eyes roam
on the verge of
vapor…
by Brenda Warren
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I like the surreal flight of vapor, specially this striking imagery :
ReplyDeletethousands of raindrops
talk
Wishing you Merry Christmas humbird and Happy Holidays ~
Water in all forms sure can bring about much
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed. The flowing of liquids draws my attention every time.
ReplyDeletei like the talking raindrops and honestly - we had our fair share of rain these last weeks and i'm getting so tired of it... thanks for re-minding me of the magic of rain again...
ReplyDeletewater in various forms...the essence of this life's existence!
ReplyDeleteWater water everywhere! Delightful.
ReplyDeleteThere is a great sense of movement in this...if we are fluid like water we can work our way around many a snag...starry write humbird...seasons greetings to you xo
ReplyDeletealways simultaneously
ReplyDeleteperform high,
sorted out
the choices,
alliances’ help
Interestingly when one aims high there are elements that are generous helping out. One has to recognize them and whittle out little irritations though. Great lines humbird!
Hank
i like the correlation you make between the rain and the rebirth.....the nourishing and refreshing that comes with rain....
ReplyDeletethis dances, nimbly as drops on the windshield ~
ReplyDeleteThe raindrop of togetherness only know friends..
ReplyDeletethe connections they bring are soft and smooth..
and never rough...
There is strength in numbers as their connections do grow..
And then an ocean of love stretches to shores in all of world!
In just letting go..
as togetherness does flow!