photograph by Robert Doisneau
Forever
spinning
my head
has been thru all
confusions
of life
simultaneously…
lunatic, my soul
space crafted
endeavor per endeavor
to spread the synergy
to save loser tangled
planets’ treads
so angels could safely
return home in peace…
return home in peace…
Sunday Whirl~ by Brenda Warren
There is nothing worse and spinning head...problems and worries all swirled..untangling them and floating them away is the key to successful endeavours I am sure xo
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Nice use of the prompts & words :)
ReplyDelete"...all
ReplyDeleteconfusions
of life
simultaneously…"
I can barely breathe, so the speaker must be blue in the face. Such effectively overwhelming lines...
forever spinning ...oh!
ReplyDeletemake my head spin also! Great poem and use of the image and words!
ReplyDeleteNice poem, really transcendental!
ReplyDeleteRound and round we go
ReplyDeleteI am always supprised when I read those wordle poems...thank you for comming by
ReplyDeleteOne gets to do all those if times are favorable! Nicely humbird!
ReplyDeleteHank
may be there are angels among people
ReplyDeleteYes, one must always be aware...for there are indeed angels walking amongst us...this is brilliant.
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That spinning feeling.. A confusion, coming to a conclusion.
ReplyDeleteWhen we think of the angels among us just imagine what the real ones are like!
ReplyDeleteNicely done! I love the part about the angels returning home in peace!
ReplyDeleteSpace-crafted endeavor, indeed...
ReplyDeleteIt must be a challenge to incorporate 2 prompts.
ReplyDeleteLooks like they have just landed !
ReplyDeletethat's my favorite part of any kind of travel...the returning home in peace part
ReplyDeleteah that sounds like a good thing to do...
ReplyDeleteLove's safety in a world of chaos...great job with the picture and word prompts!
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