Choker by I. Golembo
Souls sealed in
a snow membrane,
accepted will
stretching the brain,
loosened loops
torn apart
unclaimed patterns
chaotic art.
Worlds are entangled into
electromagnetic waves.
Layers of Thoughts –
vibrant emotions recharged…
I used to tied the tight head knot,
Now – no strings attached.
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"Find a break in the meshes of the net
that tightens around us,leap out, flee!
E. Montale
Souls sealed in
a snow membrane,
accepted will
stretching the brain,
loosened loops
torn apart
unclaimed patterns
chaotic art.
Worlds are entangled into
electromagnetic waves.
Layers of Thoughts –
vibrant emotions recharged…
I used to tied the tight head knot,
Now – no strings attached.
Ah.. still that tension between the image and the words at the end.. to carefully create with rope...
ReplyDeleteNot any more.
DeleteSo easily all becomes tangled. Enjoyed very much.
ReplyDeleteIn the way - yes. ~ Thanks!
DeleteVery cool, to use that as a metaphor. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLoops and knots - what we meet among the life. ~ Thanks for challenge, Victoria!
Deletethat is a cool metaphor... sometimes things are just so tangled and knotted... i don't mind if a little bit chaotic though... smiles
ReplyDeleteWe can alway loosen them slightly...~ Thanks!
Deleteno strings attached... except those that by love bind us
ReplyDeletethose by love don't feel like strings I guess...
DeleteThings can become tangled in the web we weave, but sometimes have to get the scissors and cut them loose
ReplyDelete...that is the hard part....
DeleteI love this poem.
ReplyDeleteThis is very clever - love those closing lines!
ReplyDeleteYeap, no more tying knots...Thank you, Sherry!
DeleteKnots, as well as beading are great symbols of life as we weave our way through and must go through so many hoops in our lives...clever poem
ReplyDeleteSometimes too many knots stop us from moving through life... ~ Thank you very much, Kathy!
Deleteto be a free soul meandering freely
ReplyDeleteIndeed! Thanks, Vandana!
DeleteIt's a perfect ending! Only way to be!
ReplyDeleteLove how you end with no strings attached.
ReplyDeleteThe last two lines are absolutely brilliant..such intelligent writing with so many layers of meaning!
ReplyDeleteA poem of growth.
ReplyDeletejanet