Saturday, November 15, 2014

The Legend




Pulling strings/many hearts,
his heart opens to give,
to sink into music
Jacuzzi, release the
burden of life, to heal
the wounds, where it hurts.

At first, voice not strong,
not his voice, the guitar
solo touching the air,
testing the walls and
material values,
volumes of love returns.

Soul aligned in his wealth
with purpose, he amazes,
brings charisma, connects
all in one, quotes to put
hands together and
follow him in one breath.


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18 comments:

  1. Absolutely filled with spirit and living their life's dream, loving what they do, pure heart and soul....rocks on and on! A perfect poem in every detail!

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  2. without a doubt. without any doubt. !

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  3. Can let everything become one and be better than bar none

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  4. In that music jacuzzi with one breath ...you have captured how he makes us care too.

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  5. It certainly is wonderful to have that kind of charisma! Very well put! Thanks. k.

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  6. Moments that changed the world and lives forever. Well written.

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  7. It's amazing the impact music has on our lives...our souls. This demonstrates its power beautifully.

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  8. Oh yes that's exactly right.. music works that way.

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  9. Though his voice may not be strong, it seems he has charisma which overcomes that slight limitation.

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  10. "Soul aligned in his wealth with purpose". It is good when that happens!

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  11. i like the jacuzzi description as a temporary solace. each one needs a spiritual renewal from time to time.

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  12. So many of us were shattered when he died. But I wasn't even his target audience!

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  13. music defines us and the singer...very well written..

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  14. love this one,
    smart and powerful implications on him.

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  15. who can forget "Bohemian Rhapsody"?

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  16. you have written eloquently of the performer! :) really enjoyed this.

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