Art by Fred Cuming
Inspirational sparks
Cultivating lovingly deeds
Soul insights;
Delighting, highlighting
Ignite
the minds.
Gossamer flames
Activate desires’ vibes
Omnipresent tongues;
Fascinated/devastated
Plummet
to transform.
Wonderfully evocative words you have chosen for this poem. I love "soul insights" especially.
ReplyDeleteO wow--deeds, soul insights, minds, desires--is there any thing beyond safety the tongues of flame fail to activate? This poem is an urge to take the plunge. Beautiful. It resonates with Sherry's second poem, but you have turned up the heat!
ReplyDeleteInspiration comes from within and this poem highlights that - evocative ^_^
ReplyDeleteIgnite and ride out the wave
ReplyDeleteDelightful imagery ~~
ReplyDeleteplummet to transform...what an interesting though...and i like that you did not take the literal flames but those more inside us....
ReplyDeleteAh - inspirational sparks set the BEST bonfires, I think! Where would we poets be without them?
ReplyDeleteoooh very passionate poem. Well done
ReplyDeletethis brings me back to the very first poetry group i joined in "Poets in Tent"
ReplyDeleteinspirational spark is spot-on. sets the tone of the poem and the flame of your poetry didn't stop until thr last line.
intense words and beautiful picture !
ReplyDeletePlummets are important in learning to withstand the slings and arrows.
ReplyDeleteWonderful...so full of fiery energy...an agent of change...for good in this case!
ReplyDeleteah bonfire within sparking inspiration...so fascinating imagery....
ReplyDeleteInspirational sparks
ReplyDeleteCultivating lovingly deeds
Great opening humbird! Love can start sparks to ignite certainly!
Hank
Nice. I like that you refer to the transformational aspect of burning within. Love the words you use.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed. Memories of sailing along an evening shore watching the shadows of naked limbs gathered around flickering light..
ReplyDeletewarm and impassioned - I love the form it is colorful
ReplyDeleteWhat a description of flame.
ReplyDeletehad to look up the word plumment... very cool...i love a good bonfire...outside or inside...
ReplyDeleteI love the idea of sparks igniting the mind - so a part of the creative process, in my case, of painting.
ReplyDeletevery creative and I like the drawing of the fireman very much.
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