Wednesday, February 5, 2014

Unthawed

Dawn…
Showing your raising path.
Rays…
Stretching to greet the flocks.
Snow…
Melting absorbed the fears.
Heart…
Thaw releasing tears.
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6 comments:

  1. GabriellaFebruary 5, 2014 at 12:06 PM

    I like the subtlety in which the pain is conveyed in your poem, humbird

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  2. MaryFebruary 5, 2014 at 12:58 PM

    It is wonderful when at last the thaw happens!

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  3. 21 WitsFebruary 5, 2014 at 7:25 PM

    The heart works in the most of mysterious ways.

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  4. Pat HattFebruary 5, 2014 at 8:02 PM

    And the grass shows no more snow causing woes

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  5. Vandana SharmaFebruary 5, 2014 at 11:32 PM

    the various stages of snow in lour life, beautiful!

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  6. Brian MillerFebruary 6, 2014 at 12:20 PM

    that thaw is a good thing...the heart thawing allows things to enter in again...

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