Sunday, February 2, 2014

Entrée

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Skilled bucolic dancer,
she tiptoed my dreams
barely fed.

Open sharp edge,
her potential
never will leave others flat.

As former adventure seeker
I miss alterative
road.

The virtual play of senses
with synergy balance
I probe.


Brenda Warren

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23 comments:

  1. Kathe W.February 2, 2014 at 1:38 PM

    nice beat to this clever poem! Didn't leave me flat!

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  2. BerowneFebruary 2, 2014 at 1:38 PM

    Sprightly and astute; well done.

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  3. Brian MillerFebruary 2, 2014 at 1:40 PM

    i like the first stanza...
    my wife having been a dancer, there are plenty of them with body issues that dont eat...emaciating themselves....

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  4. Purple AssassinFebruary 2, 2014 at 1:48 PM

    beautiful.

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  5. UnknownFebruary 2, 2014 at 2:17 PM

    How wonderful to be thought of as never leaving others flat! I want to be that exciting!

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  6. Tess KincaidFebruary 2, 2014 at 3:51 PM

    Oh never be a former adventurer...

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  7. brudbergFebruary 2, 2014 at 3:57 PM

    Ah to probe.. I can see those feet doing just that.

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  8. Laurie KolpFebruary 2, 2014 at 5:55 PM

    Interesting & offbeat... I like.

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  9. Old EggFebruary 2, 2014 at 6:00 PM

    It is fascinating to see what effect career choices have on a person and on yourself too as obsession becomes irrational and sad.

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  10. Pat HattFebruary 2, 2014 at 7:13 PM

    They are sure grand but rough it can be too, be fun to play piano with ones toes

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  11. Vandana SharmaFebruary 2, 2014 at 9:05 PM

    Tempting adventures!!!

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  12. 21 WitsFebruary 2, 2014 at 10:17 PM

    Lovely words so very much like a melody .... nicely done.

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  13. Gillena CoxFebruary 3, 2014 at 4:58 AM

    balance is crucial to the reward of getting it done and crumbling the 'to do' list; luv your images in this poem

    I didn't link up this week, just reading from others

    much love...

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  14. humbirdFebruary 3, 2014 at 5:19 AM

    Thanks for comments! I enjoyed reading them! Warm wishes to all :)xx

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  15. Jae RoseFebruary 3, 2014 at 9:11 AM

    Lovely image and then the words skip down the page..maybe the spirit of adventure is more important than how it is undertaken..

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  16. kaykualaFebruary 3, 2014 at 10:30 AM

    As former adventure seeker
    I miss alterative
    road.

    One should always be on the move - it looks like! Nicely humbird!

    Hank

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  17. flaubertFebruary 3, 2014 at 11:50 AM

    Well done, humbird. Wonderful jaunty beat to this.

    Pamela

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  18. Bekkie SanchezFebruary 3, 2014 at 12:01 PM

    Nicely written with a great beat! Bravo!

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  19. GailFebruary 3, 2014 at 12:26 PM

    Creative combination of prompts.

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  20. JulesFebruary 3, 2014 at 3:13 PM

    Nice. Twinkle toes!
    Thanks for your visit to 'Stasis' in WP. ~Jules

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  21. HelenaFebruary 3, 2014 at 3:54 PM

    Perfectly put! They do look inquisitive feet....!

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  22. Belva Rae StaplesFebruary 3, 2014 at 6:45 PM

    Nicely done!

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  23. S.E.IngrahamFebruary 4, 2014 at 3:48 PM

    Unique take on these words; completely different from anything else I've read and I really enjoyed your poem...

    http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2014/02/here-where-lie-former.html

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