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I has erected
the pyramid
of 3 words.
Under the roof
of LOVE
I felt cozy and safe.
Thru the windows
of my spinning world
I saw YOU.
The warmth passed
thru the chimney
filtered I.
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Clever write, love this.
ReplyDeleteYou, I and love- what more is needed?
ReplyDeleteThat is creative and super clever....a great take on the prompt and a killer imagination to boot. I think the title fits, very appropriately to the style of writing. Great work and thanks for participating, I always appreciate reading your words!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the prompt, H. Appreciate your words :)
DeleteI love that the reader must construct this sentence.
ReplyDeleteThe three words that can mean much
ReplyDeleteThis is very clever. Loved it.
ReplyDeleteYes very clevery
ReplyDeleteThank you, friends for kind comments! Much Love! <3
ReplyDeletei like the i love you hidden in this...
ReplyDeletewhen a house is a pyramid of i love yous i think it a good thing...
smiles.
I think you have found the BEST words of all!
ReplyDeleteI too love how you did this! Very creative
ReplyDeleteThis is excellent.
ReplyDeleteI must add my kudos for how clever this is...great job!!
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