Monday, March 21, 2016

Collage 19: Monsters inside and out

Mindlovemisery's Menagerie


I went inward;
when I was gone
you talked
abruptly
resentful?
No,
but your rebel
beat my authority
voice of storm
& lightning bolt
fault
we stopped checking
sovereign rails
taking on
withdrawn wagons
of monsters fates
along
civil rights
clear intentions
under the bed
required
the goal
we inclined
to carry through life
so
when met/realized
the opposite
posture & shape
passing crossroads
got shocked & surprised
to witness
the shadow selves
they were
magnificent force
meant to
explode,
with intensity depth
inside of us


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5 comments:

  1. I love the vivid nature in which this is written...amazing.

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  2. A full on forceful attack of the senses indeed

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  3. I like how you incorporated the quote.
    Echoing the 'Monsters' within!

    (Spring has sprung here...so I've been working in my yard...
    thanks for stopping by my 7 prompt mash.)

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  4. they were inside of us!

    Very true, humbird! Many fail to realize the enemy inside. Cleverly presented!

    Hank

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