Sunday, March 27, 2016

The Phantom Words Lead



Mountains.
High & Low peaks.
Crooked smoke
of spoken words
phantom pebbles
thrown into water
name of God
in the light
of unknown
three...
by Brenda Warren

Read more at: Sunday Whirl #244

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14 comments:

  1. MaryMarch 27, 2016 at 6:42 PM

    There is something about those pebbles thrown into the water, I think! Could they evoke thoughts of God?

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  2. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 27, 2016 at 7:00 PM

    I love the phantom pebbles thrown in the water......

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  3. kaykualaMarch 27, 2016 at 7:08 PM

    Phantom pebbles thrown in water invoke a kind of yearning that might get the attention of divine powers. Might yet bring good tidings, humbird!

    Hank

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  4. C.C.March 27, 2016 at 9:37 PM

    I also like the imagery of phantom pebbles and find myself wondering about the ripples they would leave.....

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  5. Keith's RamblingsMarch 28, 2016 at 4:24 AM

    Delightful

    'My friend'...a few words of whimsy

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  6. Kerry O'ConnorMarch 28, 2016 at 4:30 AM

    A perfect poem for Easter Sunday. Excellent use of words in a short piece.

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  7. Jae RoseMarch 28, 2016 at 7:22 AM

    I love the mystery and reverence in this piece humbird - like incense - a peaceful Easter time to you

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  8. Sanaa RizviMarch 28, 2016 at 8:27 AM

    Brilliant images in this piece :D

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  9. Pat HattMarch 28, 2016 at 8:37 AM

    A pebble can sure grow out and create many a wave about

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  10. Anthony DuceMarch 28, 2016 at 10:01 AM

    Enjoyed the imagery expressed.

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  11. Bekkie SanchezMarch 28, 2016 at 1:04 PM

    I enjoyed watching the ripples.

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  12. DonnaMarch 28, 2016 at 1:58 PM

    I was intrigued by the images and thoughts conjured from your words....wonderful!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  13. De JacksonMarch 28, 2016 at 6:09 PM

    "Crooked smoke
    of spoken words" -- love this, in particular.

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  14. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMarch 28, 2016 at 10:14 PM

    Beautiful and mystical. Well created.

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