Friday, June 12, 2015

Senses prevail

Erró, “Foodscape,” 1964


~ 1 ~

Long day outdoor feast
Hold on for ripe seasoning
I picked sour cream

~ 2 ~

Night cool dream
Doors are always open
Between two worlds

~ 3 ~

Monday’s tune
Sing along in the park
Pines wood wind up

~ 4 ~

Wings quivering
Innocent violence
Quilled Aquilegia

~ 5 ~

New glasses
Reframe reality
Thanks, God, for shades

~ 6 ~

Mercury turns direct
Gaining ground on the path
Lean not push

~ 7 ~

Blueberries
Add more to fill
Emotional grid


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22 comments:

  1. Anticipation expressed with each number of what is to come.. Enjoyed.

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  2. Ha. I like blueberries. I had a piece of blue berry pie last night. Definitely add to my fill-ing. Yes, perhaps we need to try on more glasses and reframe our reality.

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  3. Loved the build-up and enjoyed the dénouement. Thanks.

    Greetings from London.

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  4. Always nice to have new glasses to see one's world in deeper hues!

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  5. I specially like 5, reframing the reality into cool shades ~

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  6. I love the doors that leads to dreams..

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  7. a lovely set, the nos. 2 & 5 are my favorites...

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  8. Night cool dream
    Doors are always open
    Between two worlds

    Absolutely spell-binding :D

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  9. The second one is absolutey stunning - between real life and dream. I am biased on the first one because of the sour cream :)

    Oh - shades with prescription is a must lol

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  10. My favorite was #5, though they all were enjoyable.

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  11. There is a wonderful variety in your imagery.

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  12. "Thanks, God, for shades!"
    and the "Emotional grid"!
    Got to get some blueberries to have with my sour cream.

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  13. Delightful reading... as usual :-)
    ZQ

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  14. I especially like "doors are always open between two worlds".

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  15. My favorite this week was Mercury turning direct....retrograde is always a difficult time...and your 'lean not push' is sound advice.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  16. What a delightful medley. I love how the pine trees sing to you as you walk at their feet.

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  17. A delectable feast of words and images..at once disconnected but totally joined up...like thoughts often seem :)

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  18. Oh,

    'Night cool dream
    Doors are always open
    Between two worlds'

    Loved these lines! Very nice imagery, humbird :)

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  19. Number 2 is what I wish I had last night.

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