Heeding Haiku With HA
Vision
frantic hands –
Shake – not in
the touch much more
Stained with
salt/fault/ache
Pain absorbed
in depth
Into trials-errors
path
Strengthen
heart length will.
Sunday's Whirligig #10
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I thought that was lovely, well written!
ReplyDeleteIt is good to have the gloves to protect a bit,
ReplyDeletebut depending on the work, it is quite refreshing
to have that ache.
well put
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed.
ReplyDeletetwo hands helping out, can go far, but gloves are nice
ReplyDeleteWow, this is clever and fun!
ReplyDelete"Pain absorbed in depth" stands out for me. Very well penned. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
Many stories can be found in looking at a persons hands..all the lines a path back and forward xo
ReplyDeleteWell expressed!
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful this is, I agree with Jae, I love hands and so much can be read from them
ReplyDeletemindlovemisery
Lovely piece!
ReplyDeleteI especially like how you combined the prompts--well done.
ReplyDeleteso imaginative !
ReplyDeletei wish we could protect our heart like our hand sometimes... really they should invent heart-gloves - ha
ReplyDeleteThis speaks to an inner me that adores the resonance produced.
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful ... loved the depth :-)
ReplyDeleteMaybe it is the hands connecting that make all the difference... ? maybe the brine can be diluted in togetherness.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used the prompt's picture of gloves to add your own illustration of hands in mutual linking of trust.
ReplyDeleteHands can and do tell stories, of life lived well and with care,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Nicely done ... cool how you mixed the prompts so well! Bastet
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