Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Un-birthday present

First Massive Solar Flare of 2015 ~ NASA image
First Massive Solar Flare of 2015 ~ NASA image


Another old pain/ball/clot burst! -
the pattern lulled back        
tucked right
morphing
in modest
un-birthday present
of night -
genuine,
while you slip –
nightly swan,
wings wide open –
in
a prophetic dream,
distracted
by wizard wand
of dawn…


Read more at: Three Word Wednesday, PU Mid-Week Motif

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20 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 14, 2015 at 1:32 PM

    Oh this flows so beautifully....terrific imagery!

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  2. UnknownJanuary 14, 2015 at 2:05 PM

    a bursting dream!

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  3. SusanJanuary 14, 2015 at 4:05 PM

    I fear the clot is on or in the body or eye and not the sun or star or planet in a modest night (cool image). If only the swan would stay and not slip away like Eros come dawn. What an unbirthday that would be. But it couldn't be this beautiful, could it? Love.

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  4. totomaiJanuary 14, 2015 at 4:40 PM

    could be a dream. could be a nightmare. either way, it's magical

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  5. Brian MillerJanuary 14, 2015 at 5:31 PM

    ouch...clots can be a bit scary...
    the unbirthday present from alice...ha...that brought back some fun memories...

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  6. Myrna R.January 14, 2015 at 6:40 PM

    I like un-birthday presents like this. How lovely that you wrote about it.

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  7. Pat HattJanuary 14, 2015 at 7:09 PM

    Clots anywhere can sure make one swear. An unbirthday present would be fun

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  8. Old EggJanuary 14, 2015 at 7:25 PM

    How welcome dawn is after a horror night.

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  9. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJanuary 14, 2015 at 8:41 PM

    The "clot" gave me pause, but how welcome in the end!

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  10. kaykualaJanuary 14, 2015 at 9:49 PM

    One can expect lots of unexpected and can be most unsettling. Nights can be frightening! Nice lines humbird!

    Hank

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2015 at 10:02 PM

    A magical journey of night! Love it.

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  12. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)January 15, 2015 at 6:16 AM

    you morphed this well

    gracias

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  13. GraceJanuary 15, 2015 at 11:15 AM

    This has a surreal effect ~ Love this part:

    prophetic dream,
    distracted
    by wizard wand
    of dawn…

    Have a good day ~

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  14. UnknownJanuary 15, 2015 at 12:37 PM

    The "wizard wand of dawn" part was a nice little addition to this wonderful piece about the birthing of the universe and our solar system.

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  15. Jae RoseJanuary 15, 2015 at 12:44 PM

    That sounds like a trying night...may the next dreams be peaceful..and the next night magical

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  16. Anthony DuceJanuary 15, 2015 at 12:55 PM

    Old and new every time..
    A prophetic dream, so well said.
    Enjoyed.

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  17. MaryJanuary 15, 2015 at 1:06 PM

    Really like 'wizard wand of dawn' -- a suitable ending to an evocative poem.

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  18. ClaudiaJanuary 15, 2015 at 2:36 PM

    i like the image of the swan... ha and the unbirthday present is cool

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  19. Gen Giggles January 15, 2015 at 7:58 PM

    Great poem, enjoyed the imagery.

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  20. MeenalSonalJanuary 17, 2015 at 7:10 AM

    words weaved in a beautiful string. Loved it :)

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