'Fighting forms' by Franz Marc
I said: I’m listening…
the music takes its flight,
the nimble fingers waking up the angel
flurries.
I’m listening
to bursting climax,
the stories’ birth in lightning glory.
The sounds circling
in a joyful jive,
so freely soaring and pause in ecstasy.
I know -
simple way to life,
and feel through music,
channeling the love’s oasis.
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I enjoyed the way you convey the joy music can bring, humbird. Something so many of us can relate to.
ReplyDeleteI do think listening carefully to music can lighten the heart and enrich the spirit! Nice one here, Humbird.
ReplyDeletefeel through music,
ReplyDeletechanneling the love’s oasis. Great Poem and thoughts Music moves the spirit up
Simply beautiful way!
ReplyDeleteI love how you have captured the way music can make us feel, when we really listen.
ReplyDeleteMusic is my constant companion. It takes me places, inspires me, comforts me. It lifts me up and calms me down. Oh, listen to me going on - sorry, I was getting carried away! A lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThis sings like a music score and i can hear the notes and taste the music. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThere's nothing like listening to some good music! Happy New Year, Humbird.
ReplyDeleteah yes i think music can speak to every form of life, we are truly lucky who listen to uplifting music, the kind that transports us to a place we find happiness
ReplyDeletemuch love...
I wondered, as I read your piece, if you were caught in a particular piece of music as you put words to paper ... I was immediately smack dab in the middle of the Hallelujah Chorus ... what a terrific write!
ReplyDeleteThe words within the notes can sure brighten ones day
ReplyDeleteWonderful descriptions of the joys of listening to music. Thanks for visiting my blog as well.
ReplyDeleteI’m listening
ReplyDeleteto bursting climax,
Many often missed it! When one listens the effect is deafening. One can well respond in positive ways after that. When not listening our response do not hold water and these just fizzle off! Well said humbird!
Hank
a simple life,
ReplyDeleteblended into the music...
i could go for that...
smiles.
Well what would we do without music
ReplyDeleteMusic is definitely my happy place too. This is so full of joy, it made me smile--still smiling :-)
ReplyDeletelovely said !
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful articulation of the joy that can be found in listening. An awesome response to the prompt!
ReplyDeleteMusic has always been a motivational object of desire for me, but I mostly listen rather than create it. I can close my eyes and imagine living on a personal oasis when I listen to it. You message of sharing love with another, no matter what type it is, is very motivating.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kenn! Glad you got inspired, nice to meet you x
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