New dawn. New day. New entry chance.
When dreams embrace the heads so tight
It's hard to see what - wrong, what –
right.
Sun climbs up high to watch balance
Contrast between the sky and earth,
And humans stretching in the pause.
Hark, wind, mischievous child at glance
Inflates the clouds like balloons
The heaven hear cry of loons.
When whistling – makes the clouds dance
Migrating, they attract the bird
Who fly away to verge of world.
Wind drives the pensive tree in trance
Disheveled, for the smugly eye
Sun never be the same in sky.
~ ~ ~
New dawn. New day. New entry chance.
Sun climbs up high to watch balance
Hark, wind, mischievous child at glance
When whistling – makes the clouds dance
Wind drives the pensive tree in trance.
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The form has been put to excellent use in your lyrical poem, Humbird. This was a delightful portrait of a windy, sunny day. I especially love the idea that the sun is different every day.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Kerry for challenge! for high score :) Nothing is absolute....
DeleteAh.. Those days when the wind hunt the clouds through the sky like balloons.. So much of spring in your poem...
ReplyDeleteLonging for spring, for new...~ Thank you! :)x
DeleteWasn't this a puzzle!
ReplyDeleteWell done. Love the word disheveled in here.
Yes, indeed! Love puzzles! Thanks!
DeleteNew dawn. New day. New entry chance.
ReplyDeleteSun climbs up high to watch balance
There's so much to look forward to in a new day. Nicely humbird!
Hank
It's good to walk with open eyes! - Thanks
Deletetrue on each day being a new chance....glad that was the refrain as it centers the rest...i like all the connections you draw in the middle as well...as i def believe we are interconnected...
ReplyDeleteYes, you - astute eye- connection and interconnection - the way to live. ~ Thanks!
DeleteI like the new day, new dawn, so much promise in your lines ~ Well done humbird ~
ReplyDeleteThanks! I did promise - the new!
Deletesmugly eye! nice.
ReplyDeletejust how many of them around....
Deletenew dawn new day more fun on the way
ReplyDeleteFor sure!
Deletelove the sun in different mood..and the lovely images portrayed here...yes a new day definitely opens up a new chance...
ReplyDeleteThe sun - the main character here...so it has to be changing follow the law of the music form: sonata. ~ Thanks :)x
DeleteLove! The dreams embracing, humans stretching, child inflating, clouds migrating ...everything is awake and lively.
ReplyDeleteLove actions...and conflicts with resolutions...~ Thanks :)x
DeleteEnjoyed..
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely love the 'disheveled for the smugly eye'. I'm struggling with this challenge, haven't been able to get any words on paper yet.
ReplyDeleteHi Kathryn, I always get inspired by photos, art. What the favorite characters of your photos...make them talk to each other...just one idea ~ Thanks for feedback. :)x
DeleteLove thinking about a new dawn!!
ReplyDeleteWe are creators of tomorrow. Why not? :)x
DeleteAmazing....love it!
ReplyDelete"Wind drives the pensive tree in trance
Disheveled, for the smugly eye
Sun never be the same in sky."