Sunday, October 27, 2013

Le Jardin


Ernst Max 'Le Jardin' 1962
Heading to right
She floats in flatness of tunnel
Solo
Savoring while on the path.

Nothing she knows,
As a stream intended to turn
Left
Breaking the pod in a gust.


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10 comments:

  1. TruedessaOctober 27, 2013 at 3:40 PM

    Enjoyed following the pod on the journey...

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  2. Pat HattOctober 27, 2013 at 6:35 PM

    Breaking free for a spree

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  3. Tess KincaidOctober 28, 2013 at 9:45 AM

    Go right young girl, go right!

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  4. BerowneOctober 28, 2013 at 5:35 PM

    Freshly ingenious; well written...

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  5. Brian MillerOctober 28, 2013 at 9:33 PM

    we really know not what this life has in store for us...
    when the river may turn and our pod will pop...
    intriguing last stanza there...

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  6. LeoviOctober 29, 2013 at 3:14 AM

    Exquisite poem! This is the tunnel ...

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  7. LynOctober 29, 2013 at 9:09 AM

    She certainly seems ready..go straight for it, girl!!

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  8. Silent Otto October 29, 2013 at 9:42 AM

    Mixing together these elements has catalysed action......thanks Hum'

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  9. ClaudiaOctober 29, 2013 at 2:19 PM

    very cool unity of pic and words...

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  10. Magaly GuerreroNovember 3, 2013 at 11:43 PM

    I enjoyed the way your words made me follow all the lines of the image. I was swaying with word and curves...

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