She
said: It’s nice place.
He
said: If we get meal on time.
She:
Ah,
happy faces!
He:
Don’t
twist your neck!
She:
They
all look at me!
He:
Take
off your glasses.
She: Why door’s
closed?
He:
All
tickets are sold.
~ * ~
He:
Have
all tickets been sold?
She: Yep, the
door – closed.
He: Take off
your glasses!
She: But all are
looking at me!
He:
Haven’t
you hurt the neck?
She: Ah, happy
faces!
He: Do we get
ever meal on time?
She:
What
a nice place…
Poetry Jam ~ Backward. Palindrome poem
ha you combined these well...and its funny how two people can have the same experience but experience it so different you know...but its all in what we focus on and what is important to us...
ReplyDeletehaha talking around the same thing, has a nice ring
ReplyDeleteCute... thanks so much for taking part in Poetry Jam!
ReplyDeleteWhat a quirky and warm piece..like a bird chorus..different noises but same conversation - and thanks for following!
ReplyDeleteHa..ha...the reverse just made this funnier ~ Good take on the prompts ~
ReplyDeleteGreat take - take off your glasses - loved that, hidden depths
ReplyDeleteYou used form with good effect. A fun read, especially when one reads between the lines.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you used the BACKWARDS form. Made me smile. And it works well as a conversation for Verse First as well!!
ReplyDeleteThanks for taking part in Poetry Jam. Hope to see you Wednesday for a NEW prompt as well! Smiles.
Thank you very much, Mary! Will be happy to participate again! :)
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