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morning glory!
the well bucket-entangled
I ask for water
© Chiyo-Ni (1703-1775)
reaching closer to gulp -
sun stares back at the bottom
© humbird
Read more at: CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI Tan Renga Challenge
I really like this! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWhat better than to sip sunshine - beautiful words humbird xo
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, I can see this:)
ReplyDeleteThank you to all!
ReplyDeleteNo water found, as the sun sucks it dry
ReplyDeleteup to your desire...
Deleteevaporation...
ReplyDeleteperfect
Very visual. Makes me imagine a bright, warm day while looking down into a bucket of cool, refreshing water.
ReplyDeleteGood complement.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful completion of the Tan Renga started by Chiyo-Ni.
ReplyDeleteAh, sipping sunshine!
ReplyDeleteMuch sunshine to All!
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