Expelled from the Garden of Eden by RachelPaintings~ Etsy
You said: let’s come back
to the garden
to enjoy the tree,
the apple, the snake,
being naïve…
we’re there,
but everything ‘ve changed:
a snake wears glasses,
a transparent skin,
earbuds, aged…
apples – so many brands,
each one wrapped in a rainbow
digital case,
to eat – find a code,
dial, submit and sign
that was used your permit.
to eat or not...?
cool write, love the aged snake wearing glasses
ReplyDelete:)xx Thank you, Kathryn!
Deletethe snakes will always be there...some get a bit older...and you just have to remember, when you mess with snakes you run the risk being bitten....if you are not gentle...
ReplyDeleteAh, me? - always gentle touch...
DeleteThose snakes try to be charmers but just go the way of farmers, whack them with a big stick lol
ReplyDeleteBetter, give them an apple to feed before the nudge, no? :)
Deleteha - they consistantly change their appearance... yet in their heart they're still that old snake that you have to watch carefully
ReplyDeletehear you, mom :)x
DeleteOnce a snake always a snake - I say
ReplyDelete. . . . and that garden is gone for now.
Cheers ~ Eddie
Winning attitude ~ Thanks for the comment! :)
DeleteYes indeed the lure of the apple's still there.. and I guess the snake has to wear glasses today (or maybe a black polo-shirt)...
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