"Poets_corner" by Mike Worrall
“We ride the
white noise as a horse.”
E. Rinaldi
You instantly spiraled my world
no buckled up,
drilled inside/out of my beliefs,
the sacred knowledge I’ve gained,
even unknown one yet to me,
navigated, you trickily licked,
absorbed interlude during
a theater intermission, the moment
entwined between open/closed doors
to the opera house
as your vision of my humanity
not yet vanished from
yesterday grace…
I counterpoint guessing
what the next dish
will satisfy our insanity,
when we take strides
along the years of humming
while a soul starving for fetish
of New…
Brenda Warren
Wonderful... impressive to combine these prompts
ReplyDeleteNice bit with insanity as that sure works for me
ReplyDeleteWhat next dish will satisfy your insanity.. Now that is a very telling question indeed. This was a most intriguing response to the painting.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, very evocative ...!
ReplyDeleteInteresting. Very well compliments the art work. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
the last stanza is genius...lovely images throughout. love it!
ReplyDeletestacy lynn mar
http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/
What a ride..go you!
ReplyDelete"my believes"?
ReplyDelete"starving for fetish"?
WHAT?
i think as a world we have a fetish for what is the now...we have taken the living in the now to now is all that matters and damn the consequences of tomorrow
ReplyDeleteThere is a darkness here with your words: what the next dish
ReplyDeletewill satisfy our insanity ~
Thanks for linking up with Sunday's Challenge & wishing you happy week ~
My favorite line is "you instantly spiraled my world."
ReplyDeleteWonderful take on the painting, Irene. Some very intriguing lines in this.
ReplyDeletePamela
This:
ReplyDelete" your vision of my humanity
not yet vanished from
yesterday grace…"
Stood out to me.
Nicely wordled, too!
"what next dish will satisfy our insanity" Love that
ReplyDeleteI must be getting old as the old dishes seem to satisfy now. Insane youth why did you leave me?
ReplyDeletebeautiful and intriguing.............wow...
ReplyDeleteNow that sounds like an interesting opera!
ReplyDelete"spiraled my world"… nice.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing..yes, what does satisfy?!
ReplyDeletethe pen labyrinthine as the painting ~
ReplyDeleteVery expressive
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