She said: in your brain’s tree
bright pulsating stars;
let them spin and flicker.
If fall – into the hummock
of dreams; long fettered,
hearts come alive
one for each that you take
on the whimsical wings
in the keyhole of truth…
through the journey of
passed by bus routes
and leaves
books, so dear
returned for the coin
& smile…
enchanted,
her fingers
pulling invisible string
blue smooth veil of dawn
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I think if anyone pulls such strings I would be enchanted.
ReplyDeleteLove the idea of the stars spinning and falling into the hammock of dreams.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous image of dreams with stars falling!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
Ah, sometimes it is the invisible strings that have the most influence and importance.
ReplyDeleteSuch strings can sure be pulled and find a whole lot within
ReplyDeleteLove this: "long fettered,
ReplyDeletehearts come alive
one for each that you take
on the whimsical wings
in the keyhole of truth…"
I admire the positive message at the end ~ Pull down that smooth veil of dawn ~
ReplyDeleteNice words...
ReplyDeleteZQ
The photo collage is enchanting too, as well as your written words! All in the keyhole of truth, I really like that line.
ReplyDeleteHumbird, the ending is "enchantment" the journey of life takes us on different routes..who knows where that bus might stop...
ReplyDeletepulling invisible string
ReplyDeleteblue smooth veil of dawn
Such beautiful lines :D
Beautiful, drawing from the mundane to pull memories.
ReplyDeleteah...stars falling into "into the hummock of dreams;" and making the heart once more alive....simply gorgeous...
ReplyDeletethat was some fabulous imagery !
ReplyDeleteI think the bus route hit my heart the most..i imagine her sitting on the bus..travelling in her brain..a journey bigger than the destination xo
ReplyDeleteA breath of visions and memories have surfaced and been absorbed.
ReplyDeleteLove it..
"Blue smooth veil of dawn..." this definitely made me think of the Virgin Mary, so gentle and radiant like the blue skies above. thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThis is a stunning piece of poetry and it really captures the images, love what you did with the quote
ReplyDeletemindlovemisery
Sweet and magical.
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