Friday, December 4, 2015

into the deep north

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willow tree
mourning dead at Murder stone
by the hot spring

**
barrier-gate
invitation to taste rice
across the field
mixed with sounds of wind
blooming syllables of poems

***
shadow pond
recollection of ancient poets
in my journal
pure snow white fields
wordless



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8 comments:

  1. JaniceDecember 4, 2015 at 1:24 PM

    Nice series.

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  2. Pat HattDecember 4, 2015 at 4:23 PM

    A journey where one thing can fuel another

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  3. Drew Doyle Storm Snyder MinowDecember 4, 2015 at 9:56 PM

    lovely.

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  4. Bastet's Waka LibraryDecember 5, 2015 at 1:06 AM

    This is a lovely post and enjoyed reading it very much .. may I suggest though that: "invitation to taste a rice" should be without the article? The video that you've chosen is beautiful. Bastet

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    1. humbirdDecember 5, 2015 at 8:42 AM

      Thank you very much, Georgia! Appreciate any suggestion!

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  5. kaykualaDecember 6, 2015 at 1:12 AM

    Appreciating earlier poets opens avenue to better oneself.

    Hank

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  6. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 15, 2017 at 2:32 PM

    Very nice response on this Narrow Road episode.

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