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Reminded me of tears…
Trickle away until a brighter day
deep dew of reflection
A heaviness here. Written very well.
ahh dew you can call it tears of night until the sun rays fill in them a glitter and turn it into morning's smile .beautiful writing
such sadness in these lovely haiku.
grief can fill many a puddles at times.. good when there's a friend to talk to or just to sit with you.. reminded me of job a bit you know
Thank you so much to all my readers for thoughtful comments!
Yes indeed, but oh this image is very thought-provoking!
Reminded me of tears…
ReplyDeleteTrickle away until a brighter day
ReplyDeletedeep dew of reflection
ReplyDeleteA heaviness here. Written very well.
ReplyDeleteahh dew you can call it tears of night until the sun rays fill in them a glitter and turn it into morning's smile .
ReplyDeletebeautiful writing
such sadness in these lovely haiku.
ReplyDeletegrief can fill many a puddles at times.. good when there's a friend to talk to or just to sit with you.. reminded me of job a bit you know
ReplyDeleteThank you so much to all my readers for thoughtful comments!
ReplyDeleteYes indeed, but oh this image is very thought-provoking!
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