tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post8197366215182743710..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: Prosody: trust and feelhumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-23343332321607125962013-08-10T13:45:30.823-05:002013-08-10T13:45:30.823-05:00nice..i like the little encounter with the deer......nice..i like the little encounter with the deer... and the song-like rhythm...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-71409003104447726292013-08-10T08:43:33.512-05:002013-08-10T08:43:33.512-05:00Thanks, Brian...we're writing how we're br...Thanks, Brian...we're writing how we're breathing...:)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-9753881794938411362013-08-10T07:54:20.699-05:002013-08-10T07:54:20.699-05:00ah, lovely...i like reading every leaf...and that ...ah, lovely...i like reading every leaf...and that nature shows those that do look....well done...i could not get the rhythm in mine so i bowed out...ack...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-65435215663093085602013-08-10T07:16:49.521-05:002013-08-10T07:16:49.521-05:00Good rhythm--a lovely summer's day read. Very ...Good rhythm--a lovely summer's day read. Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-35029587535257343732013-08-09T21:47:43.409-05:002013-08-09T21:47:43.409-05:00me too! :)me too! :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-72661315697174039482013-08-09T21:06:53.891-05:002013-08-09T21:06:53.891-05:00Makes me happy!Makes me happy!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-58966927412355407322013-08-09T19:47:13.616-05:002013-08-09T19:47:13.616-05:00Glad you like it...I meet deer too often, and they...Glad you like it...I meet deer too often, and they're seem always waiting for me... :) humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-61697266897857175282013-08-09T19:41:14.335-05:002013-08-09T19:41:14.335-05:00Love the reading of a leaf's heart, and the cr...Love the reading of a leaf's heart, and the cryptic deer!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-24860529280619458722013-08-09T19:18:03.131-05:002013-08-09T19:18:03.131-05:00Thanks a lot from my hut! :)Thanks a lot from my hut! :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-20057053675443051532013-08-09T19:06:27.712-05:002013-08-09T19:06:27.712-05:00Great flow indeed as much takes seed and nature do...Great flow indeed as much takes seed and nature does abound, all around.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-3286850285212464282013-08-09T18:46:57.166-05:002013-08-09T18:46:57.166-05:00Thank you very much!Thank you very much!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-45091526365152660552013-08-09T18:07:51.335-05:002013-08-09T18:07:51.335-05:00This had a hippity hop rhythm due to the dimeter l...This had a hippity hop rhythm due to the dimeter lines. It was very effective. The use of rhythm here added to the dimension and word choices of the poem itself. Nice. Thank you.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-80184162699330582552013-08-09T17:38:06.970-05:002013-08-09T17:38:06.970-05:00thanks, Mary for reading!glad you like my poem! :)...thanks, Mary for reading!glad you like my poem! :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-38619055024588819872013-08-09T17:36:36.780-05:002013-08-09T17:36:36.780-05:00thank you! love the cat on your site! :)thank you! love the cat on your site! :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-12306085274010939142013-08-09T17:34:16.207-05:002013-08-09T17:34:16.207-05:00I'm so happy, Victoria! skipping with you! :)I'm so happy, Victoria! skipping with you! :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-79454661705911585392013-08-09T17:15:18.315-05:002013-08-09T17:15:18.315-05:00This reads so well, humbird. It kind of made me wa...This reads so well, humbird. It kind of made me want to skip. And I love nature poetry. (and hummingbirds).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-58334754952004977862013-08-09T17:09:40.536-05:002013-08-09T17:09:40.536-05:00I love grasshopper pop holding sword grass...and e...I love grasshopper pop holding sword grass...and eager to read every leaf's heart that's just lovely. Very nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-14936127738969301662013-08-09T17:03:42.044-05:002013-08-09T17:03:42.044-05:00Very nicely crafted, Humbird. Nature has many les...Very nicely crafted, Humbird. Nature has many lessons for us!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com