tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post699217159688013244..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: The trialhumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-3848189420902784852014-09-02T13:28:36.336-05:002014-09-02T13:28:36.336-05:00Erratic... but the theme is right on!
I couldn'...Erratic... but the theme is right on!<br />I couldn't find sense in what you conveyed, though I felt it somewhere.<br />:-) <br />Please Know that I really liked your creativity/originality.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-62127172228731390182014-09-01T13:53:19.624-05:002014-09-01T13:53:19.624-05:00in the flower bed
of enlightenment
wow, I'm e...in the flower bed<br />of enlightenment<br /><br />wow, I'm ecstatic, those words captivated me, leaving me unable to breathe for a moment and the whole layout of your blog is absolute flawless!!!<br /><br />Jamztoma<br />jamztoma.blogspot.comNicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-87507858827016410262014-09-01T07:47:15.112-05:002014-09-01T07:47:15.112-05:00Wonderfully written to carry the point with not ju...Wonderfully written to carry the point with not just words but structure.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-51720491804953732742014-08-31T14:56:12.861-05:002014-08-31T14:56:12.861-05:00Yes breathe and take your own way..it's the on...Yes breathe and take your own way..it's the only way to pass the trial xoJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-14648575427904482632014-08-31T14:45:51.426-05:002014-08-31T14:45:51.426-05:00A trial, yes, those falls and milestones. I find ...A trial, yes, those falls and milestones. I find it true that the ocean swallows them so that ultimately no one can follow--but we pass the trial, we always are not guilty, we always are winners. Sometimes even I can not follow what i recorded in my poetry, and sometimes poetry is the only way. I enjoyed this (whether or not I received the truth you intended).Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-21384735799131918332014-08-31T14:37:28.722-05:002014-08-31T14:37:28.722-05:00Our poems are blueprints, yes! I'd like to thi...Our poems are blueprints, yes! I'd like to think that people who read what we right can truly see our soul and our heart. Good writing, Humbird :)Toriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10570179609915990220noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-36319017271485850582014-08-31T12:30:18.670-05:002014-08-31T12:30:18.670-05:00I like the idea that our poems are blueprints for ...I like the idea that our poems are blueprints for people to follow.....a record of our "milestones and falls." Cool write, Humbird!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-70837046068522157662014-08-31T12:23:49.665-05:002014-08-31T12:23:49.665-05:00Leaving poems like bread crumbs--I love that ideaLeaving poems like bread crumbs--I love that ideaAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-81407485494200176612014-08-31T12:13:26.175-05:002014-08-31T12:13:26.175-05:00love that closing line, it sums up the images in t...love that closing line, it sums up the images in the poem. beautiful.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-11010109107575047692014-08-31T10:35:38.172-05:002014-08-31T10:35:38.172-05:00trailblazing in poems, trekking your way through, ...trailblazing in poems, trekking your way through, amazing write! have a good Sunday<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-25569768856089264732014-08-31T08:50:50.430-05:002014-08-31T08:50:50.430-05:00Such an intriguing piece of abstract poetry!Such an intriguing piece of abstract poetry!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-25042390129744168152014-08-31T08:48:51.620-05:002014-08-31T08:48:51.620-05:00"soul
lurking thru hole
in traveling bag
back..."soul<br />lurking thru hole<br />in traveling bag<br />back in time<br />to find stolen smile" this is sweetly sad...i love the end that speaks of the great truth of life...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-9268399904024594102014-08-31T08:09:38.009-05:002014-08-31T08:09:38.009-05:00I can see them, lying there, foam-edged like lace....I can see them, lying there, foam-edged like lace.Nice.<br /><br />BTW, the link put your comment in spam, so I took it out. They didn't actually say much there. We can tell he was depressed after his wives' deaths. Not surprising.We'll never know.avalonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08051456576217305095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-82387483263475544932014-08-31T08:01:42.759-05:002014-08-31T08:01:42.759-05:00Life is composed of a lot of 'milestones and f...Life is composed of a lot of 'milestones and falls.' Hopefully the milestones surpass the falls. Smiles.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-50132838445516798692014-08-31T07:50:30.017-05:002014-08-31T07:50:30.017-05:00"I’m trying to run / leaving blue prints / po..."I’m trying to run / leaving blue prints / poems behind" - I just love those lines and hope I leave my own behind too. Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-25297676106958601982014-08-31T06:35:03.371-05:002014-08-31T06:35:03.371-05:00This poem showed me that the feeling, the beauty a...This poem showed me that the feeling, the beauty around us and all sensations are felt individually. We like to think that they can be shared but not wholly. We might nod in agreement but others cannot feel exactly the same as us.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-78408432881696332732014-08-31T06:26:27.132-05:002014-08-31T06:26:27.132-05:00and happy sunday as well...and happy sunday as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-36730485151276581752014-08-30T12:20:18.251-05:002014-08-30T12:20:18.251-05:00Milestones and falls, through it all, we just need...Milestones and falls, through it all, we just need to keep on writing our own poems with our own voice ~ Happy weekend to you ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-24674393888285322022014-08-30T10:58:13.403-05:002014-08-30T10:58:13.403-05:00milestones and falls... yes... and each of us has ...milestones and falls... yes... and each of us has their own path to walk.. part of the magic..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-63124457999742384942014-08-30T08:22:54.433-05:002014-08-30T08:22:54.433-05:00leaving little poems along like a bread trail...no...leaving little poems along like a bread trail...not to follow cause this is my path...but so you can appreciate the journeyBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-76138421604169089702014-08-29T21:52:56.147-05:002014-08-29T21:52:56.147-05:00A trail along the shore, very much enjoyed. A trail along the shore, very much enjoyed. Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-57339317380002688352014-08-29T20:41:38.894-05:002014-08-29T20:41:38.894-05:00It's indeed true. Thank you :)xIt's indeed true. Thank you :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-26615516536586705302014-08-29T20:40:46.678-05:002014-08-29T20:40:46.678-05:00Thanks Pat for reminding that :)xThanks Pat for reminding that :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-19672999852628411472014-08-29T18:00:55.156-05:002014-08-29T18:00:55.156-05:00One needs to keep going ride the waves of life..One needs to keep going ride the waves of life..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-2588711252980886992014-08-29T17:58:01.248-05:002014-08-29T17:58:01.248-05:00But you have to get back up, even if the trials kn...But you have to get back up, even if the trials knock you downPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com