tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post5273083491977587320..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: Fragmenthumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-37023568529655268732015-06-02T06:26:25.086-05:002015-06-02T06:26:25.086-05:00I have to agree with the others--great energy, an...I have to agree with the others--great energy, and the bitter taste.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-81287480114450694772013-08-25T22:27:42.099-05:002013-08-25T22:27:42.099-05:00Peace, Loredana.... next time I will write differe...Peace, Loredana.... next time I will write different variation of Fibonacci...we have so many choices....glad you like this form humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-90340958474799748252013-08-25T21:40:07.071-05:002013-08-25T21:40:07.071-05:00Very creative. Very creative. hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-27475353953800731472013-08-25T21:00:37.382-05:002013-08-25T21:00:37.382-05:00i rather like the sounds of a train...i grew up fa...i rather like the sounds of a train...i grew up falling asleep to their rocking...sprung thoughts, i wonder if those are not memories and some of them def leave a bitter taste....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-3416559265949225482013-08-25T20:09:41.561-05:002013-08-25T20:09:41.561-05:00my pleasure, Ella :) ths to Youmy pleasure, Ella :) ths to Youhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-67255348143333890742013-08-25T19:42:29.001-05:002013-08-25T19:42:29.001-05:00I love your poem-sometimes our train is a rhythmic...I love your poem-sometimes our train is a rhythmic journey and sometimes a wreck. We can on though- I think I can, I think I can!<br /><br />Thanks for visiting me and the advice :D<br />You are so kind!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-39682869313739962562013-08-25T19:37:41.642-05:002013-08-25T19:37:41.642-05:00or 1-1-2-3or 1-1-2-3humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-86340441262174695182013-08-25T18:54:48.374-05:002013-08-25T18:54:48.374-05:00a wonderful enegry to your poem.a wonderful enegry to your poem.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06533340171645309120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-4998461861709068622013-08-25T18:23:35.913-05:002013-08-25T18:23:35.913-05:00A bitter taste keeps one alert at least, nature of...A bitter taste keeps one alert at least, nature of the beastPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com