tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post5130688477308351324..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: Gesturehumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-35030082164268909322013-10-20T11:01:32.243-05:002013-10-20T11:01:32.243-05:00Nice. Artistic poetry!
Thanks for visiting the Sto...Nice. Artistic poetry!<br />Thanks for visiting the Story Whirl Verse. I just finished posting the latest addition.<br />Here you go...There is always 'a new story at the edge of the end...'<br />http://julesstorypageswhirl.wordpress.com/2013/10/20/c5-brewing-questions-sw-131/<br />Cheers, JulesJuleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-14236674304149979622013-10-19T09:45:05.068-05:002013-10-19T09:45:05.068-05:00Duck when the boomerang comes, then duck again whe...Duck when the boomerang comes, then duck again when it comes back, don't be fooled hahaPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-55631302879383487282013-10-19T09:03:20.092-05:002013-10-19T09:03:20.092-05:00starting a new story at the edge of the end.. i li...starting a new story at the edge of the end.. i like that...the movement and openness of it..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-61161704720718069302013-10-19T05:35:04.591-05:002013-10-19T05:35:04.591-05:00nice...a lot of subtle / intense feeling in that l...nice...a lot of subtle / intense feeling in that last stanza...speaking like a boomerang...tightening the knot of an intimate longing is another cool line...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com