tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post4682811715533434046..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: Day cantohumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-91265114344027027362014-07-29T01:09:53.706-05:002014-07-29T01:09:53.706-05:00I've always had difficulty with Pound, but you...I've always had difficulty with Pound, but you manage to bring vivid imagery to the fore ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-78917979251791722782014-07-28T17:00:33.498-05:002014-07-28T17:00:33.498-05:00' Someone gets wax-poetic
watching hands-swans...' Someone gets wax-poetic<br />watching hands-swans in play;<br />look for rhythm/melodic patterns<br />when your life on display.' -- oh, how i adore these lines..i just discovered your blog through dVerse and so glad to. such poetic delight all the way through.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-72448467309213802372014-07-28T15:20:01.730-05:002014-07-28T15:20:01.730-05:00quite surreal...and rushing quickly...interesting ...quite surreal...and rushing quickly...interesting word parings as well..the apple rape jumped out at me immediately....oy...not sure how long i would want that day to go on....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-6841723258765940922014-07-27T23:00:37.536-05:002014-07-27T23:00:37.536-05:00This is gleefully intriguing. Wish I could get a g...This is gleefully intriguing. Wish I could get a glimpse of your mind when you wrote it. I love the image of feeding a ladybug grapes; also liked this passage a lot-<br /><br />Apple-rape, my emotional day<br />finds me clinging for<br />the hands and arrows,<br />choosing gps-shorter/faster path.<br /><br />Best,<br /><br />MikeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-56694703076083320572014-07-27T22:03:04.744-05:002014-07-27T22:03:04.744-05:00Music helps for sure :)xx Thank you, Sherry!Music helps for sure :)xx Thank you, Sherry!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-74804273781544825722014-07-27T22:02:14.933-05:002014-07-27T22:02:14.933-05:00Thanks you!Thanks you!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-52841604793465343942014-07-27T19:33:18.503-05:002014-07-27T19:33:18.503-05:00I so love these lines - "look for rhythm/melo...I so love these lines - "look for rhythm/melodic patterns<br />when your life on display."Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-42248837606322697712014-07-27T14:10:07.212-05:002014-07-27T14:10:07.212-05:00I'm feeling all energised after reading this. ...I'm feeling all energised after reading this. A refreshing piece ;-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09536345883786351390noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-74537326146367635212014-07-27T09:02:39.784-05:002014-07-27T09:02:39.784-05:00Yeah, it's hard to achieve, but it's a goa...Yeah, it's hard to achieve, but it's a goal. Thank you, Annell xxhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-23210445135236002522014-07-27T09:01:17.521-05:002014-07-27T09:01:17.521-05:00Thank you, dear Joanny! It's help to see clear...Thank you, dear Joanny! It's help to see clear, when look through others' eyes...Happy Sunday! :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-87977009800548577282014-07-27T08:58:39.200-05:002014-07-27T08:58:39.200-05:00Thank you, Karen! Enjoy warm Sunday :)xThank you, Karen! Enjoy warm Sunday :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-11923212877392373522014-07-27T08:37:28.599-05:002014-07-27T08:37:28.599-05:00I enjoyed your piece...fun and never knew what was...I enjoyed your piece...fun and never knew what was coming! I like the idea of getting optimized! That's the ticket!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-91698863914970868962014-07-27T00:28:47.293-05:002014-07-27T00:28:47.293-05:00Irene, reading your words here again played into m...Irene, reading your words here again played into many emotions! My favorite lines are<br />"hand swans in play ... when your life is on display" - swans love a show! Some times we can become stuck instead of putting in place what we might need. --enjoyed your poem my friend~! --joanieJoan Barrett Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08078385285085867796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-26914219332532826862014-07-26T22:52:39.196-05:002014-07-26T22:52:39.196-05:00Such powerful words, I felt your day as well! Such powerful words, I felt your day as well! 21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-52949947345336456012014-07-26T21:24:01.112-05:002014-07-26T21:24:01.112-05:00Thanks for support! Much Love:)Thanks for support! Much Love:)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-37575000662136542282014-07-26T21:16:08.996-05:002014-07-26T21:16:08.996-05:00i do believe in getting all optimized 24 hours in ...i do believe in getting all optimized 24 hours in now..as there are only limitations and expectations..that can slow me down in this..there is always so much more to be learned and loved...life is a joy..as long as there is more..life..only life..is what i need..to complete the journey forevermorenowasonejourney....true....:)<br />Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-19604584147390397962014-07-26T19:41:30.633-05:002014-07-26T19:41:30.633-05:00Learning...the process , you know....and 'tole...Learning...the process , you know....and 'tolerance' seems in need today. ~ Thanks! humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-25197449534078721292014-07-26T19:38:38.611-05:002014-07-26T19:38:38.611-05:00Just improvising under influence of big master...T...Just improvising under influence of big master...Thanks!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-37483699104186797372014-07-26T19:21:01.426-05:002014-07-26T19:21:01.426-05:00Lots of indecision and uncertainty. Hope it playe...Lots of indecision and uncertainty. Hope it played out well.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-54962875598131883692014-07-26T19:09:38.876-05:002014-07-26T19:09:38.876-05:00Enjoyed the linguistic ambition and sparkle in thi...Enjoyed the linguistic ambition and sparkle in this piece -a joy to read.. With Best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.comscotthastiepoethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266153714529613752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-30436968814893490092014-07-26T18:46:26.412-05:002014-07-26T18:46:26.412-05:00Thanks for taking this ride with me :)Thanks for taking this ride with me :)humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-6504410153747494362014-07-26T18:30:49.508-05:002014-07-26T18:30:49.508-05:00Wow, get optimized indeed! Your words took me on ...Wow, get optimized indeed! Your words took me on a fascinating journey in just those few verses and, in the end, delivered me to a place I hadn't realized I wanted to go till we were there!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-39831145617250097202014-07-26T18:25:54.329-05:002014-07-26T18:25:54.329-05:00When we get closer look-
It's easy to unhook!
...When we get closer look-<br />It's easy to unhook!<br />~ Thanks for stopping by<br />while talking fine :)<br />humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-47779221011195317562014-07-26T18:05:42.537-05:002014-07-26T18:05:42.537-05:00Ups and downs of the day as it weaves away, can su...Ups and downs of the day as it weaves away, can sure lead one to have quite the day. But we have to unhook here and there indeedPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-62998631137492788672014-07-26T17:41:47.181-05:002014-07-26T17:41:47.181-05:00Indeed, time - the new magic in our time! We'...Indeed, time - the new magic in our time! We're rapidly approaching the shift of boundaries past/present/future when the subject will be manifested in now...~ Thank you very much for stopping by! Much appreciated! :)xhumbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.com