tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post2994650052514332008..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: A long facehumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-15629259764589533642013-10-30T06:14:35.422-05:002013-10-30T06:14:35.422-05:00What a heartfelt piece. Lovely.What a heartfelt piece. Lovely.Lady Whispershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15051384418188753857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-76209504596381400502013-10-25T10:41:44.008-05:002013-10-25T10:41:44.008-05:00What a beautiful poem...you weave such a tender an...What a beautiful poem...you weave such a tender and heartfelt story in it.<br /><br /><a href="http://marinelareka.com/" rel="nofollow">Short Poems</a>M. Rekahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12178807956502786062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-4608822854296142932013-10-25T08:37:54.681-05:002013-10-25T08:37:54.681-05:00What a lovely little poem with a twist at the end....What a lovely little poem with a twist at the end. Really lovely.Studio Kaufmannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17594457934627321408noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-87191047621397530392013-10-25T06:16:53.315-05:002013-10-25T06:16:53.315-05:00I once made the acquaintance of a person much like...I once made the acquaintance of a person much like this. He was a friend of my cousin's (not a boyfriend, a platonic friend) and he really hurt her when he suddenly cut off his friendship after five years in a fit of petulance. The subject of the poem sounds a lot like him.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04340502635488404564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-5142425451335569392013-10-24T18:34:17.424-05:002013-10-24T18:34:17.424-05:00Beautiful way of giving a face and a voice to a fl...Beautiful way of giving a face and a voice to a flower. It gives a fascination of 'life' to something of beauty, be it a long face! Nicely humbird!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-42229951015429315652013-10-24T16:56:10.282-05:002013-10-24T16:56:10.282-05:00Beautiful flowers and clever to notice they have l...Beautiful flowers and clever to notice they have long faces. I like how you brought the prompts together here. Peggyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10811244438243200435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-86640771641967396812013-10-24T14:17:46.214-05:002013-10-24T14:17:46.214-05:00Very interesting.... what a gorgeous way to say &q...Very interesting.... what a gorgeous way to say "goodbye" though.Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-86342014493012264542013-10-24T12:38:51.225-05:002013-10-24T12:38:51.225-05:00I like how you brought all the prompts together he...I like how you brought all the prompts together here!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-43224777655711564282013-10-24T11:52:43.266-05:002013-10-24T11:52:43.266-05:00well crafted longing ~ Mwell crafted longing ~ MAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-42083450223857841382013-10-24T11:46:30.939-05:002013-10-24T11:46:30.939-05:00Yes, I love those flowers with beautiful color, fu...Yes, I love those flowers with beautiful color, fun play 'white elephant'!<br />Leovihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14970831445283294241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-85020925132301237942013-10-24T10:23:33.272-05:002013-10-24T10:23:33.272-05:00Thank you, my friends! I enjoy all your comments!Thank you, my friends! I enjoy all your comments!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-13893839708203267272013-10-24T10:14:11.836-05:002013-10-24T10:14:11.836-05:00What a love story.What a love story.Sheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-39059040501808318432013-10-24T08:35:40.988-05:002013-10-24T08:35:40.988-05:00I liked how you weaved this wistful tale Irene!I liked how you weaved this wistful tale Irene!Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-81102507275216501052013-10-24T08:32:18.133-05:002013-10-24T08:32:18.133-05:00Cyclamens are my all-time favourite flowers. I alw...Cyclamens are my all-time favourite flowers. I always have a pot of blooms in my kitchen. Despite the levity of your scene, you have touched on very real emotions, especially those felt when saying goodbye.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-29303523668966380622013-10-24T07:26:08.369-05:002013-10-24T07:26:08.369-05:00oh i bet....what a hard way to get a goodbye....an...oh i bet....what a hard way to get a goodbye....and i agree with vandana somethings we just have no control over and it can be maddening...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-79098225076303249282013-10-24T07:18:24.755-05:002013-10-24T07:18:24.755-05:00A goodbye that was destined to be it seems, nice o...A goodbye that was destined to be it seems, nice onePat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-58961629841826037982013-10-24T06:37:39.456-05:002013-10-24T06:37:39.456-05:00Yes a neatly wrapped story..Yes a neatly wrapped story..Jae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-54936193455975307462013-10-24T06:04:19.724-05:002013-10-24T06:04:19.724-05:00What a twist in the ending ~ Goodbye & face o...What a twist in the ending ~ Goodbye & face of mine - Good one humbird ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-5195145439661828832013-10-24T01:33:55.529-05:002013-10-24T01:33:55.529-05:00i love how flowers have a "face" and a l...i love how flowers have a "face" and a language as well... sometimes the communication of choice... Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-33896380130226144242013-10-24T00:06:23.595-05:002013-10-24T00:06:23.595-05:00What a beautiful love story with a difference. He ...What a beautiful love story with a difference. He knew already when he made that first long face!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-16739406882329283522013-10-23T23:52:39.087-05:002013-10-23T23:52:39.087-05:00Somethings are meant to happen and we cannot do an...Somethings are meant to happen and we cannot do anything about them.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-31930210681467467002013-10-23T23:45:14.508-05:002013-10-23T23:45:14.508-05:00Fun game! Thanks, Susie!Fun game! Thanks, Susie!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-259691950681328172013-10-23T23:39:42.114-05:002013-10-23T23:39:42.114-05:00Such a beautiful gift tucked in an array of white ...Such a beautiful gift tucked in an array of white elephant gifts...lovely story!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-54228340600831553002013-10-23T23:16:43.808-05:002013-10-23T23:16:43.808-05:00Indeed, a secret language of the cyclamen - good-b...Indeed, a secret language of the cyclamen - good-bye...~ Thank you, Ella!humbirdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-68728922281603471042013-10-23T23:04:03.062-05:002013-10-23T23:04:03.062-05:00I love the story around the flower and its secret ...I love the story around the flower and its secret language~ Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.com