tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post1277501738226389265..comments2023-10-23T08:28:47.232-05:00Comments on The sunbeam: Cathartic talkhumbirdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00106270909713851811noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-57224645392018392692014-07-02T08:45:13.116-05:002014-07-02T08:45:13.116-05:00I'm glad to see someone besides me use the wor...I'm glad to see someone besides me use the word 'hark'. Lovely work!Belva Rae Stapleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16018806071465719524noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-6528601208241565372014-06-29T07:35:39.771-05:002014-06-29T07:35:39.771-05:00This our voyage into the cadence- chop, from beach...This our voyage into the cadence- chop, from beach to 'meet' we hop, seagull's shrill, and love's belay, Thanks for taking us this way. . .!Ancient Marinerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08091570801639906588noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-30445231810821174532014-06-29T00:24:26.119-05:002014-06-29T00:24:26.119-05:00very moving!very moving!Nicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-9941059443638018492014-06-27T21:30:53.235-05:002014-06-27T21:30:53.235-05:00" asymmetry of power " comes to mind" asymmetry of power " comes to mindrallentandahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06980559347805844568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-3227690787403480082014-06-27T01:02:25.556-05:002014-06-27T01:02:25.556-05:00Enjoyed... Very good.Enjoyed... Very good.Anthony Ducehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17476865809734682418noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-70028476896321382172014-06-27T00:32:24.054-05:002014-06-27T00:32:24.054-05:00with the highest motive
in wistful eyes.
excellen...with the highest motive<br />in wistful eyes.<br /><br />excellent ending… Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-14575083092892231912014-06-26T22:09:12.296-05:002014-06-26T22:09:12.296-05:00I guess human connections include all that you'...I guess human connections include all that you've said. Sometimes though, the silence speaks its own language. I enjoyed your poem very much. Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-81197842040885942932014-06-26T21:34:26.994-05:002014-06-26T21:34:26.994-05:00How clever- I love how you paired the photo and th...How clever- I love how you paired the photo and the poem! I too believe it is the connections that make us human~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-2627110843928132612014-06-26T21:33:39.684-05:002014-06-26T21:33:39.684-05:00the bank of promises
where love - arrested,
with t...the bank of promises<br />where love - arrested,<br />with the highest motive<br />in wistful eyes.<br /><br />Perfect ending humbird! Yes, one can't really be sure can we! Lots are hidden behind the wishful eyes!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-52898677470275581692014-06-26T19:43:50.067-05:002014-06-26T19:43:50.067-05:00love this humbirdlove this humbirdSheilagh Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13741333943021570641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-20337448247531426732014-06-26T13:01:50.745-05:002014-06-26T13:01:50.745-05:00"Universe of feelings
separates, match,
mingl..."Universe of feelings<br />separates, match,<br />mingling: “It’s me, hi!”<br />Feels/thinks right –<br />We … " Beautiful ~' connections' happen even if they were not intended. Loved it, humbird! Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-48628146843790200942014-06-26T12:09:19.345-05:002014-06-26T12:09:19.345-05:00" the bank of promises / where love-arrested&..." the bank of promises / where love-arrested"... I like these lines most... Maniparnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16109166826609932168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-34577572431513274172014-06-26T09:53:49.977-05:002014-06-26T09:53:49.977-05:00I was most struck by the closing lines. I can see ...I was most struck by the closing lines. I can see the wistful eyes!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-20084689380990423032014-06-26T09:21:00.558-05:002014-06-26T09:21:00.558-05:00from trying to connect to jeopardy to promise, lov...from trying to connect to jeopardy to promise, love and wistful eyes...like this journey :)Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-74833785688107775202014-06-26T08:49:56.144-05:002014-06-26T08:49:56.144-05:00This sounds like a wonderful escape from a stressf...This sounds like a wonderful escape from a stressful lifestyle.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-35476370750097464442014-06-26T07:42:16.940-05:002014-06-26T07:42:16.940-05:00Finding the balance to integrate ourselves into a ...Finding the balance to integrate ourselves into a 'we' is a real lesson to learn..that sculpture is amazing too..helped me understand the words moreJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-3052655081245938112014-06-26T07:13:18.275-05:002014-06-26T07:13:18.275-05:00Yes, I do think that in some ways we all strive to...Yes, I do think that in some ways we all strive to connect - somehow want to find a way to be together rather than alone in our separateness.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-61521609751770869832014-06-26T07:08:04.932-05:002014-06-26T07:08:04.932-05:00love arrested, cool play on words.love arrested, cool play on words.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-30177101736994954272014-06-26T06:33:04.880-05:002014-06-26T06:33:04.880-05:00Can be quite the distance between when things are ...Can be quite the distance between when things are a bit scrambled, hopefully that bank collects thoughPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-41701226205770740752014-06-26T06:02:24.967-05:002014-06-26T06:02:24.967-05:00Like a boat to a shore. Never thought of Love lik...Like a boat to a shore. Never thought of Love like that. When we don't align correctly, there is a "whole world between." Do you drop anchor anyway?<br />Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-11394773662675426302014-06-26T01:51:40.825-05:002014-06-26T01:51:40.825-05:00The sea has so many stories to tell that its siren...The sea has so many stories to tell that its sirens call is enticing.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6202979362488261140.post-30271894369279561322014-06-25T22:55:05.916-05:002014-06-25T22:55:05.916-05:00ha. this was surprising at times...i like the hark...ha. this was surprising at times...i like the hark!<br />that last stanza is money though...where love arrested, cool line....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com